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by Anonymous

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by Iread2relax06/18/13

Ahhhhhhhhh!

I love this story.That's it. Simply love it. 5 stars.

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by Anonymous06/18/13

Total fucking rubbish

Crap

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by Monsoon639106/18/13

Much Appreciated.

Thank you for your insightful, intelligent and constructive feedback. I really appreciate how eloquently you phrased your displeasure with my story. Please do continue to critique my writing skills.

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by confed_mech06/19/13

very good

i do believe its a very good piece maybe a little better transition from argument to sex but hey just my opinion please keep writing

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by Monsoon639106/20/13

Totally Agree

@confed_mecha--You're right. I had this story laid out perfectly in my head, and when it got to the transition I knew exactly what I wanted, but when I wrote it, it didn't come out like I wanted. Oh well--the perils of writing.

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