The Fifty Year Lie Wife's Story

Rot in Hell??

So much for unconditional love. She never said the same about her mom.

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Mikoli5763 is that short for milk? You really know how to milk a storyline. At least it's the good stuff. Thanks for sharing.

Sorry Mikoli, but this one isn't up to your standards. It reads more like an outline than an actual story in the respect that the woman in question is almost clinically indifferent to everything. Kinda like she's reading a script about somebody else. You dont provide any insight into motives or feelings. At least with the husband you had rage.

And there is still be major issue about the way the husband treated the bastard children. Even considering the level of betrayal it's way out of character and therefore ruins the credibility of the story.

crap

utter crap..... that says it all.

Hmmm

I guess he should have acknowledged the children he raised. Other than that it was an excellent series.

If the dad rots in hell

Where does the Biofather go-what about inheritance left by the Biofather was the estate shared with the step siblings-How do you account for the slut mother with a fifty years lie- do Jessie should know who the wronged party is-to blame a stepfather does not put him in hell.

FOR ONE HOLDING TRUTH AND JUSTICE

and not dispensing it the same, is vulgar, TK U MLJ LV NV

Likely should of continued role of father to the bastard children.

By definition the children were bastards. But, not their fault and he was the only father (by deed) that they knew. Should of not let his slut bitch whore wife damage that relationship. Would of likely to see the slut bitch whore have a lot of pain before she cashed in. Same for asshole John. Maybe final scene John had given her an STD.

Not worth your effort

I am sorry to be anonymous but I don't remember my password. Your stories are usually good, but this one was a waste of your time. I added nothing to the original, didn't offer the reader any plot or explain the wife's side.

Great scorched earth story

Nice ending. Please write another

Maybe I'm mixing up stories...

...but didn't the children know he wasn't their father and never clued him in? If so, I can understand the excommunication the "dad" put on the illegitimate children. If not, then that's just a massive asshole move, but still atleast understandable. That level of betrayal would be hard to push aside when seeing the reminders of that betrayal all the time.

Mostly Reiteration of the Facts

Really there is no clarification or emotional tension and thus adds nothing to the husband's version. The issue with the children he raised and apparently simulated loving, does nothing for his image, IMO.

awful

who gives a fuck

hard to

believe people like his wife exist in real life but they do be it male or female there should be a place for them wait there is hell.

the bastards arent happy, they should sue the adulterers that caused this

he cared for them, raised them,, then left em with their parents, they damn sure were never loyal to him

Wow

How many more unnecessary chapters is this story going to have?

Sorry Mikoli5763 but I had to post a"letter" from dead daddy to "uncle john's" kids.

True Love? Blackmail?

I don't understand - she only sees John because he threatens her with the picture from her wedding day, but then let's her "true love" father her children?

Sucked

This author should really give it up. All of his stories suck big time. He must relish the feel of his reader's boot in his ass.

A bit of a rehash of the first story

It's still a very sad story, from either point of view.

How did Jessica's mom skate without retribution ?

it is quite apparent in this story who the World Class Whore was it was Jessica's mom, what didn't the children get DNA tests done ? Or was to just to easy to blame the man who raised them and footed their bills and education but their mom for intentionally fucking John bareback during her peak of her cycle. The woman was first class slut and a extremely deceitful bitch and doesn't merit a proper grave stone.
The ending of this flash story was a bit disappointment.

Can't polish a turd

Just let this story die dude it was dumb to begin with and your subsequent parts haven't changed that fact so please stop with this storyline

I LOVED THIS TOO! this is where i got the 'Uncle" part of my story about the husband and how they are innocent.
well the fucking husband was innocent too and he raised them and did everything he was supposed to do.
god damn guys, leave the poor husband alone -YOU ARE NOT HIS KIDS, blame your whore of a mother, blame the "uncle" but the man who gave you everything you needed for almost 50 years is blameless.

In what fantastic universe is anyone, man or woman, completely blameless?

The previous commenter . a fantasist and a pathetic loser. would you want a sad prick like that living within a barrio containing your mother, aunts, grandmothers, nieces, sisters, grand daughters, girlfriends, neighbours, female workmates etc?

Cantbuyit - please get fucking cancer or something which I could only wish on my worst enemy. And die in screaming loneliness you fuckwitted excuse for a man. Your trolling fun comes at the expense of the pleasure of real lovers of literotica.

while the story idea was OK, the development of the husband as a father seems disjointed. The character states he loves his wifes kids - he knows they are not his for quite a few decades - but not as much as his own kids he had with his lover/ defacto. As far as it goes a fair character development. However once he lets his wife and the world know that he is aware of her betrayal he never speaks to the kids he was a father to for 50 odd years? Even knowing they had no knowledge, could easily be seen as victims of their mother as well and in the story often expressed their love for the only father they ever knew?
It seems to stretch the character created to beyond the credibility mark and presents the reader with a disjointed meaningless ending to the story in all the versions written.
Of course a story is just a story, however I think you can write better than this and would encourage you to do so.

I get it he loves

his real wife and kids not the whores.....why should he? he did his father thing but he wasn't the dad... sucks to be them but he was innocent, besides he truly loved his real wife and kids not the fake family..how could he love them without seeing the evil that they represent, just because they were someones kids(not his never his) doesn't mean he had to give a shit about them or for that matter could..its not fair but they were a lie, a slap in his face every time he saw them, like any of us would have been that noble and stupid.

MORE HATRED THAN IS NECESSARY

and why blame the children, the real innocents, TK U MLJ LV NV

So far Jessica's is the only perspective without a problem

The children were completely ignorant - of what their mother did they were true tu their dad not the sperm donor.

He betrayed them in the end -

The ultimate revenge would be to live well and happy with his new wife and all of the children, they were all his one way or the other.

I was hoping there would be some joy in mudville

but alas, it was not to be. This version was even worse than the others.

btw, does it annoy anyone else that other authors promote their own stories in the comments?

Wife Got Better Than She Deserved

She got to have the life she wanted for decades, married to a man who loved her while cheating on him (and having kids with!) with her "true love". She probably wasn't going to live much longer anyway.

But to take it out on the kids is wrong, wrong, WRONG! They had nothing to do with it, he was the only father they knew, they never even had the chance to really know their birth father as a father.

He should have divorced her ass as soon as he found the pictures, or at least after the kids were out of the house.

"The pill" in 1962??

Awful story about awful people.
And if in the future you decide to write about a time which you know NOTHING about, go have a long talk with your grandmother first.

almost good

"The pill" came out in 1960

Divorce was much stigmatized until the 1970's
People who divorced even if cheated on were looked upon as failures.

The worst part of this story is the sudden cold blooded treatment of the children, who were innocent of wrongdoing.
They had no strong attachment to the sperm donor.

One Star for the wife's story. Five stars for Jessica's. So 3*

All four "adults" were scum.
The story reads like a business report. No emotion, just like Sgt. Joe Friday of Dragnet asking for "just the facts, ma 'am."

Damn

It's just a shame the wife lived so long. Also that the asshole lover's kids got screwed over, losing everyone.

Poison

For all those that sit in judgement of Ricks actions, you must realize his "wife" poisoned him from the beginning of their relationship. Her behavior was the cause of his reaction. HER children were living, breathing, proof of her evil betrayal. No, life isn't fair, and often it isn't nice. In the wild, he would have killed her offspring in addition to her lover. If he had let her live, she'd be nothing more than a refuse container for his sperm. It is nice to pretend we are better people and would do better. Consider the fact that in many cases when a man finds out the children his wife had are not his biological children and gets a divorce - he has to pay child support! There is a story for you. Tell me that is "okay" and that you could live with it. I for one could not. I am not some kind of self righteous saint. I am here for two reasons: to survive and to procreate. Those are every normal persons instincts. Interfere with them and risk death.

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Tough shitskovich. Blame it ALL on your slut mother. Cheers!

1*

absolute mess.

completely well done story that makes LW a great

place to enjoy as you masturbate. 5 for your effort. Eat shit annony!

Jessica has a valid point

If he had been a Man and ended the marriage early on when the kids are very little it would be one thing, still far from good for the kids. But to wait that long and then cut them off is the act of a shit headed egotist. He is the only person in their life he will be the man that the boys will emulate. So he is scum.
IT also looks like Rick is not equally guilty he is more so because he did every thing that she did BUT also was vicious, vindictive and used a double standard.
She did seem to love Rick in a strange way, it appears that he did not reciprocate that feeling. Victims here are the kids.

Tough shit

You're lucky be stayed around and supported your whore of a mother and you kids. A real man would have divorced her and made a big stink about her cheating. So suck it up. He was there for you until you were an adult.

1*

stupid cuck shit.