After Bedtime Ch. 04

Perfect

I love how she's hesitant about the anal the entire time. And the way he's "shhh"ing her while pleasuring her, I love his disregard for what she says.

Very good anal story

This was a well written descriptive story. Hard to tell whether you are male or female but from either perspective it was very exciting.
I loved the actual description of the initial anal entry and how his cock finally worked it's way in till it was balls deep.
Perhaps the only improvement would have been if we knew she was maybe only 13 or 14 years old.
Anal sex with underage girls is fantastic

Very Good

It's a really good story, i had an orgasm!

it was beautifully written,my pussy started dripping slowly as i was reading it.

i just cum

perfect

Loved it!!!

Read through all 4 chapters, needing to finish it. I came in each chapter. Loved the relationship between the two, was kinda hoping she'd scream more during the anal but other than that great story! Well done.

great writing!!!

"His heavy weight collapsed on top of her, covering her large frame with his own....." Wouldn't this be her small frame? No matter, loved it!!!

Well written

The detail in this story was wonderful. I had no problem visualizing the erotic hot scene. You also did great in writing how Kara thought and felt. I loved this story. Am looking foward to reading your others.