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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/03/16

4 Stars

Would have been 5 if only "Cucky" would have hung around just long enough to
pound the holy cowboy shit out of the boyfriend. He deserved it, but then really, so
does she.

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by Saxon_Hart06/18/16

I keep coming back to this

This is one of those stories that just can't help but be re-read a few times. Bravo!!

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by Anonymous06/18/16

Too absurd

She is just too stupid to be true. And the only acceptable ending would be a bomb going off and crippling the two assholes.

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by sbrooks103x07/12/16

Reading Yet Again!

There's so much crap in the new postings I'm forced to re-read older stories!

"it'll add to his humiliation" - Why would she want to humiliate the man she loves? I could MAYBE understand it if he was into being a cuckold, but since he is basically being dragged into it against his will, why would he enjoy further humiliation?

"I have to give you credit, you pulled it off." Not yet, she hasn't!

"if he's a good boy tonight, when you and I are done, he can have me anytime he wants for the next two nights. - Wow! In return for allowing her to violate her wedding vows she'll give him two whole nights of what he deserves anyway!

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by makarowce07/28/16

can't agree with you more

" sbrooks103x

Reading Yet Again!

There's so much crap in the new postings I'm forced to re-read older stories!"

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by Vapspegeo09/11/16

You've got to be kidding

PLEASE TRY SOMETHING ELSE,

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by Charliegutzache09/17/16

OMG

that's hard lesson for wifey to learn, now I know some will be upset with me, but so far nothing has happened, well nothing physical, emotionally something has, with that said is there any chance she can save the marriage or is it already too late,

for me personally l either would have told her from the start, if you do this I will leave you forever, never to be see or heard from ever again or maybe I would have stayed in the guest room as requested when they showed up, then when they were in the middle of getting it on, an were too busy to notice, film the action, then after they finished, would walk up to them to personally hand over the divorce paperwork for infidelity,

tell her she's been served, then say to her, you longer exist, hell as far as I am concerned you should have been nothing more than a cum stain on your Daddy's sheet, except that your Mummy rolled over in it, and got pregnant with a piece of lowlife scum like you, remove the wedding ring place it on the bed side table, walk away never to be heard from again till the court date for the divorce, making sure that she will be emotionally scarred for life, then find a better woman marry the new girl an have a much better life than she ever will again.

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by Anonymous10/09/16

A good short sotry ....

I enjoyed your story throughout. Frankly, the very idea of being restrained in a chastity device gives me the "willies." I could never agree to such a thing. :-)

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by Anonymous10/20/16

Sad, but its going on for real all over the world...

That is fact and what is also fact, is while every story on loving wives may techically be classed as fiction, the events contained therein, are very very real and are actually happening to someone somewhere, hourly.

Therefore, one should read each of them very carefully using them as more of a reference guide as to what really goes on within an increasing number of marriages and absorb and learn from them, because you never know when one of these stories may apply to you.

And if you think you would never fall foul of any of these events, just remember, the line separating a happy loving relationship from relationship catastrophe, is an extremely fine one, it doesnt take much, and you will be the last one to know.

READ, LEARN AND STAY ALERT, BECAUSE NOBODY ELSE GIVES A FLYING FUCK ABOUT YOU

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by Mustang88LX11/01/16

Perfect!

nuff said!

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by Texas_Air_Force11/01/16

Weak....

VERY under-developed characters. WHY did she think she could do this; was she a stuck-up rich daddy's girl? Was he a passive guy and she totally misinterpreted what she could try to get away with?

Also, she suffered very little for her betrayal. She needed to see a For Sale sign in the front yard, a pic of her and loverboy emailed to her boss, a phone call from her mother just as she walked in, asking her why she is throwing her life and marriage away for a quickie fuck....something more than just him leaving.

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by Anonymous11/17/16

Yeah

Sometimes No really does mean No. 5 Stars.

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by Anonymous12/04/16

I see my friend Iron Dragon is really into this one.

But he is of course right on the money. The bitch just has to be taken down, and she was. Sorry I can only give you 5 stars, wish it could be more.

Heartofstone

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by dissmiss12/28/16

Stupid

I believe most things are fine in a marriage provided it is consensual.
If one person says "no", then it cannot be. Simple as that.
She really cannot love or respect her man if she thinks that bringing home a loverboy and putting her husband in a chastity cage is going to enhance what they have when he has made it clear that he doesn't want it to happen.

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by Anonymous01/01/17

5*

i don't think divorce is enough though is it?

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by Anonymous02/02/17

5*

Short but sweet but, you might have added a little pain to her discovery something like she forgot that she signed a prenup and she gets shit and booted out of the house. She was a cunt and deserved a lot more pain than abandonment. I just don't quite understand the crap about "I Love You" and we'll be happier when I fuck others while you get leftovers? This is pure selfish slut crap weather it's a man or woman doing it.

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by Anonymous02/17/17

just deserts

Sometimes "No" means no. Dumb bleepin' b!+ch!! Like someone else said having a little comupence wouldn't hurt [sic].

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by Anonymous02/18/17

ARE YOU SERIOUS?

Where do these stories come from where the wife wants to swap or cuckold her husband and he says no way in the most uncertain terms and she just figures she knows that he's not telling himself the truth. That much self-delusion is a bit hard to take.

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by Anonymous02/18/17

Needed more BTB

It was a nice short story but a little more Burn the Bitch would of made it a 5 star.

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