by Temprance
i hope mason gets tortured exactly like that. omg that was very crazy but i can't wait for more to see what happens
I'm so into this story! I can't wait to see how they're gonna get out! I hope they take revenge on Mr. Mason too. He deserves it!
I liked your start but this latest is just too much. I doubt I will want to read any more.
Ralphus.
when he was away.....of course there would be no story if they did.
I'm sure if they get away mason will be hot on their tail...maybe taking her again 6months later....you can really milk this story out unless you kill mason which is what is needed...can't wait to enjoy that...
Every writer is different and has an unusual technique all their own.
Enjoy what they give and share with us.
I, myself, hope that Mr. Mason looses some flesh.
*grins*
Well written as far as I'm concerned .I hope they escape soon !
I just posted the next chapter today. I struggled a bit with it, as I had all up to chapter 5 written before the first story went live, and the negative comments threw me a bit with finishing it. The next is the final chapter and hopefully is posted in the next few days. I've received a lot of encouragement after the negative comments and hopefully you will enjoy the last chapter. Thanks everyone for your support.
Every chapter has left my stomach tied up in knots worrying about her, and now Sir, too. I'm glad she has him as a buffer, even if he can't save her all the time. Good story. And ignore the anonymous weenies who say stupid things (it's tough, I know)
I love your writing style. I normally don't like non-consensual stories turning romantic, but you made it work so well, and introduced Sir as a likeable character from the start, so I've actually been enjoying where this is going through out every chapter, and really hope you update soon(: