I am not one to comment about spelling and grammar, but it was distracting in this story. Nice idea, but no "connection" between the couples other than there were vacationing in the same place and drunk. Not too sexy, just sex.
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Weak writing killed an interesting story
I am not one to comment about spelling and grammar, but it was distracting in this story. Nice idea, but no "connection" between the couples other than there were vacationing in the same place and drunk. Not too sexy, just sex.
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