Your writing style and story telling are amazing! However, I HATE virgin stories. The girls become cliché as well as the stories. But I'm gonna stick it out to see what you have in store.
I like most romance themed stories... I like how your developing the characters. To Anon about Virgin Stories... As far as virgin stories go, I like them too as well as the non-virgin tales. I was a virgin in my late twenties when I met my first boyfriend who was the same age as me, he was in the Marine Corp., another friend was a 34 yr. old virgin, so... go figure. I was a size 8 then and people then and now claim I look like Nia Long. So these stories starring late bloomers are very possible. I like the innocence for 1, and for 2, they (virgins) are still out there and they make cute stories. But anyhume, I like your story build up.
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Anonymous05/21/14
Good start
I was immediately pulled into this storyline and settling in for what appears is going to be a very good storyline.
English
Good start.
Excellent first effort.
Great start! Good build-up, likable characters, and some initial sparks. Can't wait for Chapter 2. :)
5 Stars.
*****
Promising first effort. Very promising.
Five.
I like this!!
I like it. I love reading first time submissions. And you have a great start with this chapter. Can't wait for the next update! ツ
More Please!
Nice start.
nice
loving where this is going
Me likey!
Ryan is hot, you just made want to drive over to the nearest Lowe's in search if my very own Ryan!
Good start!
I like the story very much so far and look forward to reading more. Please update soon. Good start!
You've started something good....
Now you must finish.Great start, great writing. Looking forward to more. Love music references too.
5*
I like Ryan! mmmmmm so hottt! :3
Love it.......I want more
Well done on your first submission.
Loving both chararcters already and you have left me gagging for more.
5* bring on the next chapter!!!
NWLondonGirl
Thanks
Thanks for your support and comments. The next chapter has been submitted. Should be just a few days before it's posted. Thanks again. :-)
Love it ****
I'm loving what you have written so far.
Very nice start
Looking forward to more...
Very Good Start...
Great story in the making here...this is a good start...and chapters should flow quickly......please!
waiting
Love the start can't wait for more;)
More!!!!
I demand more!!! Lol I'm really feeling this story already!!! Definitely post more!
Love it!
Always got time for a fine ass man!
Good read
Your writing style and story telling are amazing! However, I HATE virgin stories. The girls become cliché as well as the stories. But I'm gonna stick it out to see what you have in store.
a good is a good story...
I like most romance themed stories... I like how your developing the characters. To Anon about Virgin Stories... As far as virgin stories go, I like them too as well as the non-virgin tales. I was a virgin in my late twenties when I met my first boyfriend who was the same age as me, he was in the Marine Corp., another friend was a 34 yr. old virgin, so... go figure. I was a size 8 then and people then and now claim I look like Nia Long. So these stories starring late bloomers are very possible. I like the innocence for 1, and for 2, they (virgins) are still out there and they make cute stories. But anyhume, I like your story build up.
Good start
I was immediately pulled into this storyline and settling in for what appears is going to be a very good storyline.
Love it
I love this story, and I only just began.
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