i think it would have been better if she wasn't cheating and the couple stayed together. write ten little sequels where she gets it while watching the video he so kindly filmed of her first time - loving every second - and maybe even get some toys involved or bring someone in.
after all of that, it's sad to think that the guy hasn't moved on at all, he sounds bitter and vengeful. a bit of a downer.
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i think it would have been better if she wasn't cheating and the couple stayed together. write ten little sequels where she gets it while watching the video he so kindly filmed of her first time - loving every second - and maybe even get some toys involved or bring someone in.
after all of that, it's sad to think that the guy hasn't moved on at all, he sounds bitter and vengeful. a bit of a downer.
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