Owning Bella Ch. 07

It was well worth the wait and as good as ever. Thank you

Great chapter, loved the all the plot offshoots, was well worth wait. I really want to see Rob with someone! This story has gone from strength to strength and your writing has improved immeasurably over the time. Well done, really enjoyable read, can't wait to see what happens to Jim! Thanks. M.

Another slam dunk ellie. Great job. I also can't wait for rob to have someone. :-)

Well worth the wait

Another great story. I was nice to see a more reflective Mel and the conversations finally taking place. Love the twist. While I understand that life happens.....hopefully it will slow down a bit so we can were your taking us next. :-)

Bella gets stronger and more confident each day.

thank you for another great chapter it was worth the wait. but please hurry with the next one i dont think i can hold out that long. LOL

I can't deny....

I can't deny that despite the lack of excess sexual activity in some of these chapters, it is a wonderful series. Engaging, exciting--- the type of story that actually causes one to gasp aloud, and provokes one's hips to rise. The only issue I am having with this series is the significant number of characters involved. There are many new characters being introduced in what seems like every chapter. As opposed to film, with reading, it can be hard to put a name with a face. Once you start giving the "extras" names, there is more to keep track of, and more to be confused by, which can diminish the pleasure found in the story. Maybe that is just me, but the logic stands. I believe that if one more character is introduced, I will have reached my limit. That is the only piece of criticism that I can formulate. Other than that, this is a wonderful series, and I am inspired to follow your work.

I have put my pike away.

But have it handy in the closet. ;)

Mel is doing better, at least minimally explaining the danger. The ending implication that she may be done living in the basket heartens me. I am enjoying the trust building honeymoon, but look forward to more intellectual interactions between them.

I struggle with understanding the type of possessiveness that enjoys flaunting the possession to such a degree. I get it intellectually, and I am not for guys who want their women in pioneer dress. I guess it takes the big brass balls to seek to inspire others to covet what is yours. I am now worried that rich club creep will plot to steal her away. The line to get Bella forms to the right. Anybody else shows up and they'll have to start taking a number! :D:D:D

Thanks for continuing their journey.

Love this story!

I have absolutely enjoyed reading this story and am greatly looking forward to more.

Love This Story

Hello I don't comment often. I've read Mastering Bella and Now am reading Owning Bella. I adore Bella as a character and her loving master as well. It's nice that Mel messes up and isn't the perfect master as most stories portray the master(s) involved. I would love to see Rob end up with his own submissive though at some point if that's in the cards. Anyway just wanted to say that your a captivating writer. :)

Thank you

Thank you so much for taking the time to leave comments for me Each and every comment make my day, like most of the authors here we lie to know what people think of our stories good and bad. Chapter 8 has been submitted and should be up in a few days I hope.
Happy days ^_^