Service Call

hey awesome

happens a lot... don't kid yourself that it does not!!!!

hopefully

bill will find a woman to teach him and get rid of the whore.

Maybe if Bill had tried...

...caring enough about his woman to learn how to make love, she would not have strayed.

Maybe Bill....

Should go find another wife. Married 3 months and this? Run Bill run. Aren't married people supposed to discover these thing themselves? Like I said run Bill

Let face it

If Bill tried any of this she would have screamed at him to stop. The only thing she wants from Bill is out of her restrictive parents house and freedom. She does not love Bill never even hints at it. she wants "companionship of a loving husband". You know like a good dog. To quote the main theme "RUN BILL RUN".

The stolen time

I said several times, addition to the cheating trinity
1. Humuliation
2. Bastards
3. STDs
the most demage THE STOLEN TIME FROM THE OTHER SPOUSE IS IN THE CHEATING.
What stolen time is?
The cheater spouse STEALS MUCH TIME FROM THE OTHER SPOUSE, THAT TIME WICH THE BETRAYED SPOUSE COULD USE TO FIND A SECOND CHANCE MATE!
This stealing is gender free..........no double standard!

Sad

A cheating whore skank slut wife is born. Pray for the husband.

The comments would be hysterically amusing were they not so ignorant. Someone writes a nice piece of fiction - be it fantasy or the recounting of an interlude in there life - and the morality police spring into action.

What a sad bunch of ... supply your favorite descriptor.

It was a good read.

The revenge stories are fantasy too

@ thebuffallo We wait for your understanding comment for revenge story comment section, that
the revenge stories are fantasy too.

Good source

BTW Good clueless husband stories are good idea source for REVENGE STORIES.
The idea source of my most revenge stories are clueless husband stories........

Hey Buffalo

Speaking of ignorance I think you might have moved to the head of the class you pompous twit. "An interlude in there (their) life" For somone throwing stones at other peoples ignorance I would think you could spell. Whose laughing now dimwit.BTW Regardless whether this story is fantasy or reality it is somone elses opinion not gospel. Like I said pompous.Lastly I agree most of the other commenters Run Bill run

Thanks for the effort.

Another Ashson story

More crap on the net. Why does this asshole bother?

4+ million views in under 8 months.
That's why I bother.

And it's fun thinking up situations that make some people froth at the mouth.

That Explains Alot Ashon

So basically you write to piss people off? Congrads. A noble thing to do. Like I said it explains alot. Maybe your fixation with rape in your stories? Once again.....Sorry I don't do frothing

For this story, nearly 10,000 views so far and only a few comments.
I write to entertain, both my readers and myself.
My viewing audience says I'm doing it well.

Sure Do Think Alot of Yourself

Is it really all about the hits? Seems flawed to me.BTW I like nost of your stories and generally speaking score them high even if Im a bit confused on your reasons for writing themselves

The human brain imagination sympathy projection

The human brain works with such methods, that the reader imagines himself/herself in the read or watched fictional writting, movie, cartoon, novel, etc.. The majority of the human brain works with such method. (a minority can read or watch without imagine himself/herself in the story) I could call this thing a special projection into the story, movie, etc...When the reader read this story, many readers project his imagination sympathy to the background character husband. The story is not pure sex scene or stroke story, so there are background story (3 months married pair) gives possibilty for imagination projection for many readers It may be the author's aim was the sympathy projection to the electricty fixing man or the cheating wife, however imagination sympathy projection of many readers works to the background husband.
That reader, whose imagination sympathy projection is to the background character husband, that reader would like to imagine this background husband character to guess his wife cheating nature and he gets rid of her in an imagined sequel. How could this clueless husband story be written to an imagined revenge or consequence sequel.................
Somebody whose imagination sympathy projection in his/her brain is to the cheating wife or the electricity maintain man, that is angry with other imagination sympathy projection readers (look at thebuffalo).

Short, well thought out amusing tale - like many of your others.

Thanks for writing 4*

Yeah, you're doing it well

That's why I'll give it what I think it deserves. 1*

King of the 'Shorts!'

Another wonderful story, although the denouement is totally foreshadowed. I am sure this is an 'experience trumps inexperience' tale, rather than a 'fooled ya' one!

4*