... from the first word to the last and it is a shame we have to say goodbye to this wonderful story. You said, and I quote, ... it is not the end for the characters; I hope this means they might return one day!
Very few writers manage to get the fact that the Mistress has feelings too. You've managed to capture both the motivations of the submissives and the Mistress quite well. Congratulations on a fine series.
I really love this series. Not only because it has very detailed and grounded characters, but also for all the emotions. And as has been previously stated "the Mistress has feelings too", which you give life to beautifully.
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This has been excellent ...
... from the first word to the last and it is a shame we have to say goodbye to this wonderful story. You said, and I quote, ... it is not the end for the characters; I hope this means they might return one day!
Thank you, five stars and a favourited story.
Very thoughtful
Very few writers manage to get the fact that the Mistress has feelings too. You've managed to capture both the motivations of the submissives and the Mistress quite well. Congratulations on a fine series.
Absolutely grand!
I really love this series. Not only because it has very detailed and grounded characters, but also for all the emotions. And as has been previously stated "the Mistress has feelings too", which you give life to beautifully.
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