All Comments on 'Perfect Suburban Mother'

That was really great could a sequel be possible

Loved from start to finish, please do more it lends itself to continuation.

I want to read about him fucking his mother's pussy and when she tells him that he is on a web cam, he wants to continue making love to his mother and making money for her.

Perhaps he doesn't want to go back to school for a couple of months, and stay at home and fuck his mom all day long, making her rich beyond all of their hopes.

A very hot and erotic story, and there is really so much yet to be told.

Thanks for the read.

I will echo the others. More please

Another great story from one of the best authors on this site!! Thanks and please keep up the great work, PS we all want to see Dylan take his Mom to places she has NEVER Been Before!!

talk about breaking the Taboo, it was a very good story, being lead on to the climax was well done, Miranda was a Bitch, that was money driven, where as Audrey, was in need of money an ended up trapped between the devil and the deep blue sea, so to speak,and Dylan is a typical young man, get it where you can. what a great mix.

one of the most entertaining stories I have read in a while.

Keep it up,Especially Dylan.

I think your tale needs a little more feelings added. its a little like, step one, step two.

like a repair book. maybe add, how hot,big, or wet he felt in your mouth.

use words that tell how things feel or taste or how you liked or disliked what

was going on. maybe just say things about how you had to do the deal so

people would not find out. just feelings. not a bad tale just my ideal on

how to make it hotter.

Great and I think well written. Awaiting for the next one. Would love to see this expanded and follow some of the suggestions from others.

Don't be concerned about critics. This is fantasy land, and that was one great fantasy. May I have another chapter?

This story is the best one written for Nude day. I do hope there is a follow up to go along with this adventure.

Pretty friggin hot. I loved it.

I think this is one of the hottest submissions I have read here. I certainly hope there is more with these two. I realize it will be hard to duplicate this, but please try. Eddie

loved it very much thanks

I loved the story and the fantasy. I hope the 'affair' between mother and son will continue, and all boundries of what is wrong and taboo, with regard to what the two of them are doing with each other sexually, will disappear, so they can become even more intimate and uninhibited with each other, and maybe, bring others into their new, secret, naughty, lifestyle.

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for another chapter in which they fulfill all of the possibilities of this relationship!

Loved it. You need to keep it going.

The poor boy: - 'Vagina? - And what a pleasure, delight, to have vaginal's sex? - 'Old-fashioned and obsolete' ..

'Anus is the only real sex!' ¨ - A and tastes great (licking the remaining excrement from the anus)! '

- Yes?

I don't know about the boy fucking his mother up the ass the first time. Look, his mom is naked in front of him, he sees what lots and lots of boys'd love to see, his own mother's mommy-hole, that wonderful hairy hole between his mother's legs that he was born out of. Dylan's harder than he's ever been before. Doesn't it make more sense for him to stick his big stiff cock up his mother's cunt? I think that that's where a true motherfucker would want to blow his young balls, that's what gives him the thrill of a lifetime, shooting a huge dose of sperm up his own fucking birth canal. Anyway, that's my opinion. By the way, I think HeyAll is the greatest.

need more chapter to develop relationship

It's sort of like an improvised porn film. If they are going to have sex, I'd prefer it to be their own choice. I like the mom /son element, but I think the premise should be different. The story itself needs more fluidity and life. It's a little like reading a script.

Personally, I thought it was very well thought out, and I liked it. But what do I know? I'd read more.

another excellent story by one of my favorite authors. thanks.

a rather good fantasy, keep going. as for the detractors, a person's fantasies are not always realistic so piss off. Good story, liked it.

Loved your story. You left me wanting more. Please keep writing.

Very well written but a little weird in the beginning when the special modeling agency that finally triggers everything is 'the local one'.

I am so turned on.I'd love to have an offer like that. The idea of beginning a relationship with my son like hers has me really thinking. Thanks

Surely there'll be more to this HOT Story? Thanks.

Awsome. I came shortly after they did :) Great story

very natural. I loved it

To be perfectly honest, I thought the beginning of the story was not well done.

However ; ) you brought the characters to life as your telling of the story progressed. Very nice, and worth 5 stars. Thank you.

Please keep this one going. I hope you have part two ready to publish.

You did a fine job with this story, having the mom agree in something like a submissive way then do it with her son, wow, very hot.

Add more chapters illustrating the moms devotion to her son...

So hot, so real, so dimensional; she handled it like a true devoted mother. Bless her hole.

You have an excellent story line to follow and you expedited to my sanctification , Bravo ! As mentioned in a previous comment your keeping this story line going would be a plus for a legion of future followers IMHO . Bravo !

Loved the story!! Very good read! Kept it interesting, intriguing, and erotic!

Loved the story, hope there is a part 2. This is one of the best mother/son stories I have read I a while.

That was probably one of the hottest story I have ever read on the subject matter. I hope there are more. Wowza gave me a rock hard hardon without touching it. Yeah hot stuff bring me more

First I've read that was handled well. It was up to day with technology. And I believe if mothers and sons were naked at home when the children were growing up, there would be less sexual perversion in our country. If something is "forbidden" or "taboo" then that makes us curious and resort to darker feelings. If a family shared their bodies in a clean manner with one another, then in the outside world, a boy would say "big deal" and shrug off seeing a scantily clad woman. This is just my opinion.

Hello HeyAll,

Nice story! The only time you almost lost me was when Miranda blackmailed your main character into continuing her 'legal obligation'. I loath anything non-consensual. I would have preferred if Miranda cajoled Mom that having one's son in a sexual content is a fantasy for many instead of just threaten to expose her. Or at least have mom make her decision to continue based partially on her desire for her son versus her fear of being outed to her neighbors.

Feel free to tell me and my opinion to take a hike!

Happy Writing,

TittyBear69

Would love chapter 2, please?

It would be nice to have a second chapter. Son eating his mom's pussy. Then sexual intercourse.

My thanks to you and Stormbringer for such an innovative idea. You took an idea and turned it into a very interesting story. It's well written and sexy thinking about a large audience watching incest.

...since it's fiction it doesn't matter ... but there's this little thing called a release form in the real world; she and her boss could be in real trouble for what she did with her son without letting him know and getting a signed release.

But that would mess up the story, so who cares?

That was both innovative and fucking erotic. The best stroking material. This makes the fourth story I've read of your's an I enjoyed the other three almost as much. I favorited it. Keep 'em coming.

If only I had a SON...

Love and Kisses, Maryann (10-28-2014)

I never write requesting a sequel. I don't even really like multipart stories. In this case, I'd like a sequel where they invite Miranda over for a threesome on camera and make it a snuff film.

That was so hot. I'm dripping

one of the hottest stories i have ever read

hot hot hot

A dick beater for sure. Would be nice to read another chapter or two......

as much as i love my son, i don't think i could ever do anything like this, but then they do say money talks, so for the right price, you never know

Something like this would never have dawned on me, but it's different, interesting, sexy, and well written. I believe it would have been even better if the sex sceneS were longer and more detailed.

Would have loved for the world to see when my sons took turns depositing their cums deep in my ass, wonder how rich I might be now.

I loved this story. I loved the way that mom talked herself into pleasuring her son. I think she should have told him though, to make the show even more naughty, between hot sexually starved mom and perpetually horny son. She better get herself on the pill so that Dylan can pound her mommy pussy for her as well as her mommy asshole.

I like what you've done so far. Now you need

To expand the story, have the son agree then

let the fun begin. Include vaginal sex somewhere

in the story, maybe some lite bondage. Open your

mind to the possibility of things to come. Try to

put yourself in her shoes, make it erotic, sexy,fun.

I must say I was surprised that he did not fuck her cunt once they got started. The boy has great control...or maybe just does what mommy wants. Let him develop.

I would love to see more of this mom and son

Crazy hot!!! 🔥🔥🔥

Great story! Very hot 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 and deserving of a continuation! I know you don't usually write long, drawn out stories, but this one would merit a second or even third chapter. 5🌟 rockhardick

Continue please