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You would probably be better off just not having your characters talk. They have some of the fucking stupidest conversations I've ever read.

I thought the conversation was perfect for this tongue in cheek style of story.
Loved the clever ending - I don't know how you keep coming up with them.
Always look forward to your stories, as I know I will be entertained.

As opposed to an anonymous critciser about fictional characters' conversations.
That's fuckin stupid...