All Comments on 'Jewels - The End of the Day'

I like the way you tell us what happened, yet allow our imaginations fill in the blanks. You were right, it is not a quick jerk story, but it was enough to stoke the fires to rub one out later. Keep it up, even if others think you didn't go far enough. I like your style. Jennifer

Your style of writing gets better with each story you compose. This one is by far your best. I'm just sad that this series had to come to an end. I also can't believe that this was a true story. Nice work man. Keep it up :P I hope to read more stories by you in the future.

You have been blessed with some caring friends. Thanks for sharing the story.

This has got to be the best stry I have ever read.

That was an excellent triplet of stories! How can I arrange to come back as Jason?

Not only was Jason and Jewels first time special, but the time spent with Susan and Jennifer was too.

Great story. Thanks for posting.

Can I say? I will miss Callicious's wonderful stories and the great man his self, but I will have him still here in my favorites to read anytime I want.

Thank You! You have brightened everyones lives with your writing.

As others have noted, even after several times through, I will miss Callicious' writings!!