All Comments on 'Simplicity Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Aww...

...sooo sweet and lovely :) Please let them be happy together soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Loved it!

This chapter was so touching, I cant wait to read more.

Keep up the good work! :)

chesthairslavechesthairslaveover 10 years ago
Overwhelmingly Beautiful

You dear writer are a pearl of great price. This chapter was lyrical in poetic perfection. Duke finally had something to say and did so with graceful poignancy. A perfect ending to the chapter as Luke 'just sat and stared at him till the night was through.'

_nastasha__nastasha_over 10 years ago
So sad and beautiful.

That was truly great writing :')

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great stuff

Love it! Love your characters, love the way you write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
good

its getting better and better, more of a LOVE story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
It's coming!

I can sense their love-making sessions coming soon. They are falling in love, and Duke's opening up to Luke is a good sign. Can't want for them to undress each other, and for Luke to run his fingertips across the soft hair of Duke's chest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Beautiful!

Great storytelling. LOVED it!

sopharoonessopharoonesalmost 9 years ago
shivers

oh, that has given me some serious goosebumps. geez you write well, i love the ying and yang of your main characters! i dont even need the erotic, its so nice.

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