Forbidden Dance Ch. 02

Awesome

Very good conclusion! And loved the ending. So funny yet so fitting! Thank you again!!!

Good read.

A more realistic ending. Play with fire, you will get burned. Saw one minor typo. But it didn't detract from the reading. Nice ending.

Dang

You had to throw some reality in, dammit! But a great tale, well told. Looking forward to more of your work.

Victory

Victory can be expensive in many ways, and the reality of this victory shows that truth. But it is a victory, and that makes it worthwhile - I hope. kmac99, keep writing! You're Good!

That ending had me cracking up. I kept waiting for them to get caught. Their first fuck was in a public place surrounded by mirrors. It was only a matter of time.

fucking pervert

Fucking pervert

I Fucked my Daughter

At last I got to fuck my Daughter. She asked me to make a baby inside her.
How could I refuse her. I rammed my cock deep inside her and filled her with my potent sperm Deep into her shaved pussy.
We moved to the other side of town to await for the birth of our Child..

Yaaa... Not so bad!

As if not to judge what you write, it's still you're better than what write all obsessed geeks with 'shaved' the brains, focusing not on the woman and her body, but on scratch up the remains of excrement from the rectum - and at the anus.

- Better also than the 'shaved' brains, salivating at the thought and the sight of 'smooth' and 'shaved' pussy - that the real, natural 'pussy' is reduced to just a meaningless piece body, that the 'shaved the brains' are becoming indifferent when they viewer the "smooth" (pussy) and after some time have to look for additional stimulation.

- Instead of fascination most beautiful part of the female body, begin to be excited by something that 'hits' in their silly senses stronger, than these 'smooth' and 'shaved' - i.e. the buttocks ..
- And typically must be large (the bums) to interact with their distorted senses ..

You.. Finished 'strong' accent - the figures have gone the way which have chosen .. - Good work!

Ein unerwartetes Ende

Ich bin (fast) sprachlos. Der erste Teil der Geschichte war hervorragend, der zweite noch besser. Und dann dieses Ende: überraschend und verwirrend.