by MSTarot
I thought the story was well written. I would love to see more of these two.
Finally a story that fully embraces the nude day contest themet. Very beautifully written by a skilled author. Thanks for writing.
The reference to Kiss and Gene Simmonds did remind me that he has a very long tongue - now transferred to Jazz that would have been a treat! Loved this. Nice to include a black on white theme too. I could thanks to your characterisation picture these people as one couple. Beautiful.
I have experienced many emotions while reading stories here, but never before have I wept at a stories beauty. Thank you so much for sharing it.
Had a feeling that was going to happen, ha. Enjoyable read on the whole, interesting to see the 'coming out' experience from a 1st person perspective.
The switches between present and past tense towards the end were very distracting, though.
I just read this for the second time. Loved it just the same. Hoping that there will be more of these two soon.
I don't even become hard as I read many of your stories. My turn on is beyond that for me, regardless of the genders. My mind's turn-on is what I seek most, thank you.
I think I share Travis's skills/confidence but my subjects seem so difficult to find.
I wish you the best in doing more than just your skilled writing, tho I do suspect you may have similar places to turn-on. ;)