Finally a story that fully embraces the nude day contest themet. Very beautifully written by a skilled author. Thanks for writing.
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Anonymous06/24/13
Gene's tongue
The reference to Kiss and Gene Simmonds did remind me that he has a very long tongue - now transferred to Jazz that would have been a treat! Loved this. Nice to include a black on white theme too. I could thanks to your characterisation picture these people as one couple. Beautiful.
English
A very well developed...
and beautifully written story! More, Please.
Casey 1988
I thought the story was well written. I would love to see more of these two.
Wonderful
Finally a story that fully embraces the nude day contest themet. Very beautifully written by a skilled author. Thanks for writing.
Gene's tongue
The reference to Kiss and Gene Simmonds did remind me that he has a very long tongue - now transferred to Jazz that would have been a treat! Loved this. Nice to include a black on white theme too. I could thanks to your characterisation picture these people as one couple. Beautiful.
A great entry for Nude Day and a story well worth the read. Thanks!
What a lovely story
I have experienced many emotions while reading stories here, but never before have I wept at a stories beauty. Thank you so much for sharing it.
Caught On Cam
Had a feeling that was going to happen, ha. Enjoyable read on the whole, interesting to see the 'coming out' experience from a 1st person perspective.
Loved it
The switches between present and past tense towards the end were very distracting, though.
Great!!
I just read this for the second time. Loved it just the same. Hoping that there will be more of these two soon.
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