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Bella's Ghastly Encounter

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/26/13

pretty much absolutely terrible from the first few lines

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by Anonymous06/27/13

sex is 1 paragraph out of 10? gg

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by Anonymous07/05/13

Don't listen to any negative comments that come up here. You had a solid premise with this story but you needed more detail if you really wanted to make this story something great I think. Keep trying, I'd like to see whatever misadventures you have planned for Bella.

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by Anonymous07/31/13

Great Idea!

Cute premise with lots of potential. I agree with the previous poster. This, as well as your zombie story, would benefit from additional detail. Something a little fuller bodied and you have the possibility of something unique and entertaining.

Can't wait to read more of Bella's adventures!

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