It was short and strait to the point with room for a lot more action later on down the road if you wanted to. Looking forward to reading more of your writing
Like he hates me. Like he loves me. Fine line, eh? Great story...thank you!
Desperatly hot. Will you be ok?
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Love this story
It was short and strait to the point with room for a lot more action later on down the road if you wanted to. Looking forward to reading more of your writing
That'll do!
Like he hates me. Like he loves me. Fine line, eh?
Great story...thank you!
Desperatly hot. Will you be ok?
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