All Comments on 'Brian's Dream'

Yes, you will like to eat her shit and drink her pee too, then lick her clean.

You feel more sexy if she ride you on four, on your knees and hands or give her shoulder ride for long distances, then when you are back home, you have to lick her clean after eating her shit.

You may also serve her girls friends or boy friend, and she will be more pleased when you lick her ass for lubrication and suck her boy friends dick, then he can fuck her more easily. After that you have to lick both of them clean, may be she will order you to eat there both shits....

Very good and well written story with a superb climax which leaves the reader wanting more. Well done and thank you.

Poorly written. The bad grammar and and misspellings were distracting. There was no gradual build up...it happened far too fast.

Really hot story. Like it very much. just at the end I would rather have it a bit more drawn out. the end albeit clearly obvious is a bit abrupt.

Nevertheless great story. Appreciated! Thanks

Part 2?