Which may be unfair; but the story has devolved iti the standard LW fare. Hot wife sees a big cock and immediately loses all sense of morals, reason and "has to have it". Meanwhile the husband who is conflicted about his wife's actions always finds himself with the biggest and strongest erection of his life and the author always makes it like a surprise. As if a man could be erect while being turned off.
I don't know about you; but if I am watching something that is gross, I don't get an erection. I wouldn't be sporting wood asking myself why.
Wish Trace had been our neighbor when my wife was young and beautiful. She would have done anything to get that big cock.
I actually thought the husband was showing some balls at the beginning of this and would put a stop to this nonsense. Sadly, as other comments indicate it looks like it's turning into a standard cuck story. I even thought the neighbour might not go for it until he got involved at the end.
Keep it up. excellent story!
...like watching a train wreck in slow motion. I think I'll walk away before the really gore bits start happening. I think we can all agree this is going to end badly for hubby.
Thanks for all your Feedback. I have left many opposing opinions - mostly because they had the BALLS to attach their names to the comments.
If you would take the time to read the CATEGORY of LW, it refers to "Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more." Do you prefer LW stories to stay plutonic for either / both adults?? I would consider that Romance.
Also, the description of THIS STORY is "Wife loses weight because of hunky neighbor's son."
I have not written anything in regards to infidelity to the married couple...just voyeurism and exhibitionism - so far. Who knows if the story won't lead to her bringing a girlfriend / or the neighbor's ex-girlfriend to bed with them? Funny when the shoe's on the other foot!
For those of you who have read too many cuckold stories in LW, and are disappointed and frustrated - talk to Literotica about setting up a Cuckold category if they annoy you that much.
Again, Thanks for the comments.
Keep it going. Found myself getting wet - I love to tease, and this is right up my alley. :)
Thanks a lot for your story!!!
As long are the chapters more exciting are!! ;)
Please, go on soon
Compared to most stories it ends up with the hubby having a heart break because his wife cheated on him with a young stud THIS STORY HERE IS ORIGINAL!!!! that's what I liked of it the hubby didnt have a heart break his wife DIDNT cheat on him AND the stud and hubby and wife gave each other an awesome SHOW!!!
200/10 it surpassed perfectness for me!!!
When is the next chapter
When you leave a series too long it becomes difficult to continue with as you have to go back and read the initial chapters again. That tends to get a little boring as you have a remembrance of the issues but still have to review some of the details.
If it's starting to get to be a long series as this one seems to be headed it becomes too much and the story gets dropped.
Well that sucks cuz it seems as though it was just getting revved up with the stud getting asked to go on business trips. Nice twist....
Can we have part 4 soon
It's pretty much 6 months now and no new chapters??????? How about letting us know what your intentions are. If you're not going to finish this I (among others) will stop checking back for updates.
I have to say it is beyond annoying when an author starts a good story and then drops out of sight and doesn't let his/her readers know.
It has been 6 months and no new chapters. We want to know how it turns out and how your wife loses more weight.
Everyone, we appreciate all of your wonderful feedback (constructive, and critical), but we have completed this story.
Right around July, we had a death in the family that was expected, but still very draining emotionally. Somehow, continuing on with the story took a major back seat. We appologize for those who have continually been asking for the next chapter.
There may be a day that we will pick it back up, but we wanted to at least inform everyone that this is as far as the story goes for now.
The writer says Tom is NOT a cuckold but CLEARLY he IS. The actions of being jealous but allowing if not setting up more intimate flirtation between wife and trace shows he is a cuckold. What husband does the gym scene then pool scene of watching wife swim with object of her desire and his jealousy then give them alcohol as he then suddenly leaves them alone to swim when he could have swam with them? And the sun never sat? Sorry this is a story of a cuckold in denial.
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