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The Captives Ch. 02

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by Evilpandaqueen06/25/13

good story.

I'm enjoying the story so far...so is it possible that this man is her "dead" husband? No body recovered plus same nick name. I wonder how he feels about playing with his daughter in the last chapter? What a wickedly romantic twist . (If it's true). Please update soon!

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by scipioparkins07/05/13

loving this very much

Nice style, well told, more please.

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