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A Small Town Girls Wake Up Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by mel_pomene06/26/13

Welcome to Literotica, greasy 963!

This was a fine introduction to a new author's work - thank you for writing it and sharing it with us. A most entertaining story and I look forward to reading more of it it soon.

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by eWoman06/29/13

I'm curious..

as to your intricate set-up. It has lots of promise, but has left us hanging. Will there be more? There are minor editing corrections to be made -- verb tense, skipped words, etc, but nothing major to really worry about.

You've got a lot of characters going on and it will be interesting to see how you weave them all together.

I hope you see this comment as constructive and really hope you continue with this. But never fear -- you can write! Take care...

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by greasy96306/30/13

Thanks

thank you to all the votes and comments. Please leave me comments of what u think and i am working on chapter 2 and hope to post it soon.

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by Anonymous07/03/13

More?

You know we all want more. I hope it's as good as the start, since you have a very interesting situation here.

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by Anonymous01/03/14

god hunni i love your story almost as much as you

Baby girl ive seen your new chapters and you the reader have soo much more to read and hehe gets better trust me love ya hun yours forever Mistess kia soulstealer ^.-

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