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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/26/13

Two huge flaws

There are two huge claring flaws. First is the over and improper use of "word - word" which isn't a pause as the proper method is to use a coma. Second is using "come" when "cum" should be for an orgasm/semen/etc. even grade school kids know the difference.

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by Anonymous06/26/13

I think "Anonymous ...

... with his "Two huge flaws" really ought to check what he's written before Posting it.
Or perhaps he was in a 'coma' when he wanted to write 'comma'!!

Ever heard the saying "People who live in glass houses shouldn't throw stones"?
People who make errors shouldn't criticise others!

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