Castaway Ch. 04

Poor guy so confused and afraid. Amar need to man up and just take it slow with Jasmine. She will understand.

short..

But I loved it. Hope to see more chapters in this series.
Loving the progress. Amar needs some competition 2 see what jazmine means 2him n I hope he sees it soon. I like the story its not at all what I expected or predictable witch is a rarity in that respect. U deserve ten stars.

Ah, it coming together the back story on Amar help out alot. Luis and Bianca indeed has made this a party. I hope there is not to much "game playing" just enough to keep it Calente!! Looking forward to the update

good series so far

I like it, but I just wish each chapter was a little longer. 2 thumbs up!

Amar needs to relate, relax and release!!

I am loving this story even each chapter is short!! Luis was so wrong for that, knowing what he has observes with Amar yet he is making the moves on Jasmine. Bianca is so annoying, why didn't sharks eat her?

Nice very nice

It can be short just as long as you keep updating like you are. I'm alright with it. :-)

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Can yOu please stop making the chapters sooo short. It's kinda irritating. I mean I'm not trying to be disrespectful , but it's just really annoying. However you really improved the last 4 chapters and the story really is spectacular.

Shake your dicks fellas this pissing contest is over LOL men