All Comments on 'Soccer Mom Slave Ch. 03 of 03'

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FA_JFFA_JFalmost 11 years ago

You completely suckered me in. And I was so pissed of at the line, "Nothing in the world was more important to her." I was grinding my teeth and had the urge to throw the iPad against the wall.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
My.....

Excellent story, loved that he was her husband/master. Made the story even more enjoyable. Very arousing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Wow!

Wonderful story! What a shocker! After I finished reading it the first time I had to go back and read it a second time. Very erotic! loved it....please write more. Love your style.

TornadoTysTornadoTysalmost 11 years ago
what an ending !

I am so relieved that the master was her husband all along.

Great ending

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyover 10 years ago
damn

I would love to give this story more than a five!!, I thought maybe her master was her husband but dismissed that thought glad I was right the first time. I hope you keep writing this was a good read,

FindmywayFindmywayover 10 years ago
OMG - I didnt expect that!

What a wonderful ending - a couple that's able to fulfill their needs in a loving way. I have to admit I didn't expect that ending. Very intense and refreshing.

submittingsparklessubmittingsparklesover 10 years ago
perfect!

Too bad more cops don't have such excellent wives. It'd make the world a better place.

johnnuttalljohnnuttallover 10 years ago
that was a suprise

Nice soccer mom ending

jenellesljenelleslover 9 years ago
Lovely Twist

The story itself was excellent. There were times when I was wondering about her husband and family.

Sighs with envy. Thanks for making this one such a superb story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

I would love to see how far she is willing to go for him. Great story.

MikePaulWritesMikePaulWrites9 months ago

great story. Loved the ending. *****

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