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by chytown07/01/13

Thanks***

For the read. I think??

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by EveEden07/01/13

I have a feeling...

That he is an axe murderer.

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by Hubbys_Princess07/04/13

hummmmm

Kinda short for a fairytale, holds promise if you were to take this ad the idea and then do another draft with more details. The ending was just plain confusing. The thing with fairytales is they at least have background and some substance and the love in them is enchanting and believable even if the rest is unbelievable. I didn't get that from this I'm afraid.

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