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Abby Ch. 11

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by Anonymous

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by bruce2206/30/13

Very Good

"A holiday fumble", that caught my funnybone..

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by CrisInGA06/30/13

I am totally hooked.

My first task of the day is to look for your latest offering. I read each chapter twice, the first time I read through to the end, then I go back to the beginning taking time to look up all the places and names that peak my interest.

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by Tootsall22212/09/13

Excellent writing and plot development

So far this is the very first story I've read on this site which has no obvious spelling or composition errors...a pleasure to read. I'm getting the feeling that I know where the plot is going, although it is well-disguised. The lack of the old "push and shove" does not detract from the read whatsoever and I wonder that it hasn't been commercially published. I will comment again a bit further on when appropriate. So far, "two thumbs up".

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by rightbank12/08/15

this series

deserves more readers

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