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Great Start
Very good start, I like that you're creating some plot and personality before diving right in! I look forward to more. *****
more please
great start but you've left me wanting more. Hope its not too long thanks for sharing.
Nice
Sex doesn't always have to mean "sex".
Congratulations on a confident and delicate debut.
A fine first chapter
Echoing the previous comments, my compliments on your initial effort. Hoping it will be the first of many
Very Nice
I love F/F pet stories and this one is shaping to be a very good one. Please continue and thank you for sharing your work.
slvdogheart
Please keep writing
This story got my full attention. I'm on the edge... and begging you for more
in love with you
you described my wishes! i want an owner
One step at a time
So nice to find an author who understands the give and take puppy play. I found this story hit all the right buttons - and we still haven't shed one item of clothing.
Bravo!
Excellent opening chapter
Normally I do not read "pet" stories nut felt I should have another go, and I am really glad that I did. A very good opener to what I hope is going to be a fairly lengthy story.
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