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The Twelve Tables Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/01/13

More.....

So worth the wait! Love your stories but this one has some mystery of an unknown undercurrent that makes it special. More please.....

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by Anonymous07/05/13

love this

Please don't stop

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by Mayness07/10/13

I can bloody believe I missed this chapters release! Ellie thank you so much for continuing this story! I really enjoyed his chapter, full of tantalising glimpses of what may happen, will happen or shockingly won't! I personally would love to see Peri freak out a bit at some point. I feel Josh maybe getting ahead of himself somewhat and although Peri has taken everything in her stride so far, there has got be something that makes her snap, just a little bit ...and I feel you are deliciously leading us towards it! It's a wonderful chapter, I wonder if it was in a different category (BDSM) whether more comments would be made. Well done, I really hope it continues. M.

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by redyellowgo07/26/13

Oh my....

I would have missed this....I had to check something from one of your other stories and saw that this was posted.

Just a wonderful sexy tale. I will check back in this category from time to time. I hope to see chap 5 posted in about a months time, that is if you are keeping to the Owning Bella schedule.

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by cillery09/03/13

WOW

You really got the story going now, You can't stop now, please,

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by xelliebabex09/03/13

Best of intentions

I have every intention of continuing this story I just have a few things on the go at the moment and little writing time. Now that the final chapters of Bella are done and submitted I am hoping to have more time for my other series as well.
Thanks for hanging in there with me.

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by Anonymous10/10/13

more?

when are you going to add another chapter?

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by Sassy_th4ng01/08/14

Uh oh...

You've started a new Bella series, does that mean this one is still on the back burners?

Sorry, but I'm greedy lol I want more of them all and I want it yesterday! Lol please don't forget about this series when you get some time.

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by CandyKD01/16/14

MORE Please

great story and waiting for more.
Love the direction and slow pace.

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by xelliebabex01/17/14

New chapter

I have just finished the rough draft of a new chapter of this series, I am trying really hard to get back on track with all my series this year. Hopefully it will be out in a another week or two.

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