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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/02/13

I find myself wishing that the story was a little longer. More drawn out with more of a build-up. As it is it feels more like an outline than a story.

Otherwise not badly written.

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by IronDragon07/02/13

5 Stars, but this really should be in Erotic Couplings. No hubby/wifey mentioned, as LTW said.

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by m48gunner07/02/13

Is there a husband

No mention of a husband or family..so it would appear that we have two adults meeting and having an evening together....

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by wantmore207/03/13

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This is my first time posting a story - sorry I posted to the wrong category

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