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Great story.
More please!!
An Excellent Story!
I have noticed treating bitchy women as they are,
really stops them dead in their tracks.
I've personally had 3 Liked and respected me for standing up to them.
I've noted, Taming your fears and letting them go,
is what pisses the Bitchy women off.
they're like Succubi they love to feed on fear.
more
Can you do more with this couple. Like them having normal relationship. The guy putting bun in her oven and then sex during pregnancy.
Don't stop!
Please add more to this story. Like the one person said, maybe go regular relationship and some good preggo sex?
Wonderful story
Like your other readers, I hate to see this great story end. I kept hoping that somehow he would manage to get through to her and her attitude would change for the better. It did seem at times that she almost enjoyed him, even a little bit. I'm just a die hard romantic so I always hope things turn out great in a story. In anycase this has been a great story from start to finish. You are a very good writer with a good grasp of the power of the written word to paint a picture in a person's mind. Keep up the good work and keep writing. Thank you for a wonderful reading experience. Now to once again give you a '5' vote.
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