The Last of the White Tigers Ch. 07A

Do you have plans to expand this story? I hope so. It has the potential to go for more chapters. :)

Welcome back! I'm glad your continuing on with the story. i enjoy the each and everyone of the characters. I will look forward to the next chapter.

Please continue!

Please continue! This is great! Can't wait to read more.

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Thank you so much for writing again. I hope that all is well with you. This story is great please continue

i loved it

I can't wait to read more!!! I want more!!! I want more!!!

More soon please

Finally

I am happy to see that you are continuing this story too bad it is so short I can't wait to read the next chapter although I might just have to go back and read the first 6 to refresh my memory keep up the great writing.

Wow, here you are, two years later.

I'm surprised you came back but it will be nice to have a conclusion to your story.

This chapter was a bit choppy, which is to be expected after a long hiatus. The plot is simplistic, which I don't mind but the characters are so one dimensional. They seem like puppets. Their reactions are not natural and the dialogue is wooden. For example, Kay sets eyes on a little girl, decides that she wants her and the girl and her grandmother are thrilled. Unlikely. Most kids don't want a complete stranger to be their mommy, especially when they have a loving family member already looking after them. It seemed rushed and just didn't sit right. Every event in the chapter seemed forced.

If you take to time to really flesh out the characters and get into the details of the storyline, it will be much more enjoyable to read. An editor would also help with some of the grammatical errors.

Thanks for coming back to your story, though! I hope you stick with it this time.

NEXT PLEASE!

I hope you write next one! I like the story

great

Absolutely love this series. Was extatic when the newest one posted. I hope u continue to write. Lookin forward to the next posting.

Great I am glad you have done this chapter now for the rest please.
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I am looking forward to the next chapter

I am looking forward to reading more ^^ very well done

I have reread your stories and k am looking forward to reading more....great chapters!!! Please post more

MORE!!!

I have read the series at least 6 times now so I can keep up with any new chapters. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

Please

Please post the next chapter! I love this series!

More

I have read all 7 chapters of this. The storyline is fantastic and I can't WAIT for the the next chapter ^_^

love it

Amazing storyline and I love the characters. Cant wait for the next chapter

MORE please

Great story line, just enough unrest to keep one on their toes waiting for what comes next. Hopfully that will be the meeting on Kay and Don. Please finish this story!!!!

Great story line

I'm loving this story line. Yes it's moving fast but it's keeping up with everything. I hope to see more of this story. I love ending this with the adoption.

Why have you stopped writing? I love the story..

Please continue

I hope that you will continue to write this story! I absolutely love it!

when you are going to write the story???please do it quickly....

Plz update