by _
This story is really hot, and original. I would love to read what happens next on the walk home!!
This is some very good writing and it was enjoyable. You should continue this piece.
one of the hottest thing s ever had my dick hard n seconds keep rightin more
you will denfinetly have to make a sequel to this...maybe they go to another party together again or something but damn it was hot
i have enjoyed all of your stories that i have read, but this one is definately my favorite. keep up the good work
The story is much more original than many others I've read here - things like the tiger suit, the wacky idea to walk around in it, a costume party, an intense vegetarian with a naughty streak - and they work so well because they are imaginable, i.e. we think "hey, this could happen" (at least enough.)
You could work on some of your specific descriptions, i.e. "and it got me really excited" gets a bit boring. Perhaps something like "and I broke out in sweat- it was so hot," or "and the friction (or rubbing) got me hard in a second."
Well done with the ideas, though. I really enjoyed it.
If there were more stories like this, I would never leave this site!
You have a good handle on what you're doing, and you like the brother sister incest, like me: roticwizard. Though I can't make them work nearly as well as you; you've got a good handle on them.
Keep making them good.
Very hot, very erotic, sex in a tiger suit. Quite the imagination.
Definitely got me wet.... Good story. Wished I could be in there with her....
DAMN! I almost came while reading this story!
My dick is rock hard! Can I borrow your sister?
Amazing story, one of the most original, if not the most original story I have ever read in this site. Continue writing this great story and maybe a continuation of the story wouldn't hurt.
Poor story line. Needs fleshing out I hate 'wam bam thank you mam' stories. Give it some body
I think this story is rather original. The tiger suit made it pretty interesting. However, you need a better storyline.
This is an excellent start -worthy of a sequel. Thank you for being innovative, believable and erotic!
I cannot believe how good you are. You must be writing from experience to be so on target. Need a second, third, or maybe even a fourth part to this one, or most all of your stories.
Rjay
that was an amazing sex story that deserves props! would love to have a sister like that and would love to no what happened on the way home!
a turn off for me--However I did like the plot
to the person who said "what crap" about this... you're the crappy one. i mean really, it's one thing to give constructive criticism, quite another to be a blatant asshole.<BR>
and seriously... if you don't like the "wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am" kind, do us all a favor and scroll down to do a length check then move on to a story that draws on forever, whereby assholes with no life like you can get their rocks off and hopefully lighten up a bit in the process.<BR>
i cum quickly and i happen to like the ones that don't dick around and overdo the plot with unnecessary flourish.<BR><BR>
_, as usual you've done a brilliant job and i hope to see loads more of your work in the future. many thanks and keep up the brilliance babe!<BR>
5/5, 100/100 ;)
Excellent story. I liked the setting and idea of the over sized costume. Hope there's more with this one :)
That story was really hot! I felt I was there, in the suit, behind her. Nice writing. Keep it, umm, up!
Its not generic and it made me laugh a few times, good times.
It was short, but it got the job done. Very intense. Hope to hear more about other encounters they had :)
Loved the idea; never had a sister, and never got invited to a party like that.
I remember asking my brother to go to party were we all dressed up. It was a horse and I was in the front and he was behind me. We both got naked and I got in and he followed. We were no sooner zipped up when he came deep in my fertile cunt. By the time we got next door he had come in me four times. It really felt nice having his cum in me and running down between my legs as we walked. No one guessed who we were and when we sat down I felt him bottom out in my cunt. It felt as though my cervix was opening up to let him go deep in me. I wound up pregnant from that party and I have gotten pregnant seven more times by my brother.
I was truly expecting something much more kinky like him walking around in the costume with her while fucking her or something... another meh story ending up with sex and an abrupt ending that leaves one to their own imagination... aka a bit cliche. Still good room here for something more kinky.
Great story, short but good. Made me so hot, I had to go take a shower
thanks, short and sexy and fun,,,really liked it!
love good raunch!!
Dude, I thought that it would be hotter if he just slid into her from behind while they're in the middle of the party. Just saying...super hoot.
loved it... when is sequel coming...
Also anyone knows of incest with dad (daughter wearing a backless nun's costume)
fantastic story!! But you should keep it going, make more chapters, say what happened on the way home and when they got home, keep it going!!! :D
almost came, which for me is very dificult ;)
loved the story bit to short hope theres more to cum. i love brother sister sex thanks
Wow!! that was hot!! Had sex with my sister after we were both grown and was it ever the sweetest forbidden fruit you can taste. I'll write about it some time.
Way to go, keep writing.
Please write more stories like this...maybe some with horny mom/sis and reluctant son/brother.....your story made me soooo wet
I think I read this once and didn't care for it. That changed this time around.
I expected them to walk around the party in the costume together, with him inside her
Jeeeszz, that was defuckinglicious. One of the best visuals of an oooh so so story; it is just beautiful, and exotic, and thrilling and Sister is so damned nonchalant about the whole affair--taking off her underwear, potty break crushed up naked with her brother and then fucking--it's blissfully cute! Cute? Exactly, cute and charming!
But, it was so damned easy to imagine myself walking around in that suit naked with my sister playing rub-a-dub-dub on my pole-vault. Thrilling! It was over too, too damned soon!!!
No one noticed two people in one costume? I doubt that's achievable which detracts forum the rest of the story. I also laughed when she came without any penetration, clitoral stimulation or anything. Oh we'll at least it didn't take long to read.
Shit. You obviously manipulated the reviews, which is really pathetic beyond words.
I could totally imagine doing this to my girlfriend, not my sister thou.
Could there be any more Anonymous comments here? Read this a long time ago and loved it. The way you described the awkwardness and eroticism of being jammed together like that made the story.
the whole family was going to the party me and my brother did`n want to go as we had to dress in funny costume I did not wear any panty in the party my brother came up behind me he said this party sucks I agree so lets go get some fun I took his hand and put it on my bum in the dim light we found a chair he sat down open his fly cock out I sat on his lap and fuck him I must have come at lease 3 times after the party mum and ask if we enjoy the party we both said it was the best party ever my broth is now my fuck buddy when i not on a date we fuck
Good story but the turning around back and forth and taking underwear off without getting your legs out of the costume was a stumbling point.
Ive read several costume sex stories on here of varying types. Two, at least, were both in the same suit, gotta love it! This one was nice and short, even if the brother was almost a pussy (barely a save, lol) ..um um i didnt mean to, uh, it wasnt you! Could he look any more stupid or insult her more? Lol! Then she's shoving his dick in and hes like, 'are you sure?' Of course shes sure numbnuts! Rofl! Still a fun story!
as I did.
they actually stopped and made it physically credible after the incidental contact had turned them on. the eroticism of the two of them juxtaposed in the costume made it even more fun.
that was great for a short story,,and yes the scenario would be a possibility hence making the story that much more real..
OH MY FUCK that was soooooooooooo fucking hot, have you got more costume sex stories, i hope so
The only improvement would be if they had done more than just dry hump inside the tiger suit. Being zipped up together under such close quarters, just think of the possibilities. With a title like "Costume Sex," that's frankly what I would have expected.
but a couple of logistical questions are nagging at me.
If she couldn't zip the costume alone, how could he?
"She tried to reach her back to unzip the costume, but she couldn't stretch that far.
"You'll have to unzip me, I couldn't get it on by myself either."
and, inside a closed costume, why was he wearing a mask?
"The mask was a little bit of a tight fit, and my face ended up in her hair"
I've read a few costume sex stories, not sure if this one borrows from another or another borrows from this one. Theres a two headed monster one with brother and sister in the costume, heads sticking out with makeup on that is really, really, really good!
Enjoyed this one, my only complaint is that the story had him fucking her right after he just came. Dude needs a little recovery time! Guess we expected him to be fucking her while they walked, but she is prolly too short for that ;)
Really well written story. Really something one could get off to :-)
so hot and very interesting i want sex in a costume!
Her body is so tight, her tits are so firm. They haven't had time to sag because they were only a few years old. I think she wears so little around the house because she likes to get me horny. She always smiles at me when she notices I have an erection. I like it too because it makes her nipples hard.
I went to a costume party, I was at my sisters place, her husband of 2 years was a real dick, always out with the boys. He wouldn't go with her, she chose a donkey outfit, she was the front, I was the back. We put it on in the car park, I played around a bit, pushing against her. I heard her laugh, it was such fun, The suit meant we were both standing, weird shaped donkey. I held her around her waist, I got hard, she could feel it and without even hinting said we better do something about that now, she pulled her shorts down, come on, I pulled mine down, she leaned against the car, I had never fucked my sister before but it felt so natural as my cock slid into her wet pussy and it wasn't long before my cum shot into her. Mm, in we went, it was hot in the suit, my cock never really went down, she told me to sit, which was awkward but she made it easy by sitting down on my cock, moving around. We went home, undressing in the car park, she sat quietly until we got to her house. He wasn't home, she dragged me into my bedroom and got on her knees and said give it to me , and I did and to my delight my sister orgasmed over my cock as I gave her my second load of the night. It was never mentioned again.
this is it
"Party,
I remember asking my brother to go to party were we all dressed up. It was a horse and I was in the front and he was behind me. We both got naked and I got in and he followed. We were no sooner zipped up when he came deep in my fertile cunt. By the time we got next door he had come in me four times. It really felt nice having his cum in me and running down between my legs as we walked. No one guessed who we were and when we sat down I felt him bottom out in my cunt. It felt as though my cervix was opening up to let him go deep in me. I wound up pregnant from that party and I have gotten pregnant seven more times by my brother.?
ROFL OK... why do people comment stuff like this lol
I READ THE ORIGINAL AND BETTER STORY A COUPLE OF YEARS BACK...ONLY THE SISTER WAS WEARING A DRAGON SUIT (she never took off her underwear)
, THEY STAGGERED AROUND THE PARTY GETTING SLICKER AND SLICKER FROM THE HEAT OF THEM BOTH....AFTER A TIME THEIR UNDERS SAGGED FROM SWEAT ,FINALLY SLIPPING INTO HIS SISTER (without permission) OUT AMONG THE PARTY.... WITH EVERY STEP THE GOT CLOSER TO THE CONCLUSION....THAT WAS A SMOKIN STORY ...NOT SOME LUKE WARM HALF ASS RIP OFF......
great story, but too short, you need to follow up with this one and yes it is similar to another story here on Literotica...... but go for it..... come on
Was rereading this one for fun, when I got close to the end I came across this bit:
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She held me tightly against her, milking me with her pussy to intensify my pleasure. I fell forward, holding her body beneath me. Her legs were locked tightly around my waist. I felt her breasts crushed against my chest, and her hands roamed up and down my back. She whispered into my ear, encouraging me as I came. I gave her all I had, and we both stayed locked together, completely spent.
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I've got to say that coming up on an orgasm, going through it then coming down while your girl treats you like that is fucking awesome! Absolutely the best! Of course her squeezing you with her pussy is a given plus, but having her wrap her arms and legs around you and holding you tight while your brain is exploding just makes it ten times better! All that extra pressure and skin contact just amplifies it so much! So guys, ask your girls to do all of that, girls take notes (and come over when my wife goes to work, we can play daddy/daughter brother/sister! hehehe;)
same idea of costume sex but diffrent hole to fuck...MMMMN but both are awsome storries.......just this one I feel should continue......it has awsome potentials
....but what happened on the way and then once they got home ?
This story isn't finished, is it !
This was awesome, kept the anticipation just right. Nice easy way to keep juicy things flowing.
This is one of the first incest stories I remember reading on here, so I thought I'd look it up. Still. So. Fucking. Hot.
The thing made me want to fuck someone so bad. I cumed 5 times. I kept janking on my dick as the story went along. Anyone want to get i a costume with me and fuck each others brains out. I am really horny right now. I need some porn to make my dick go soft or go hard again
Nice not to have the 18" dick between the 48GGG tits. And rubbing one out between her ass cheeks was great.
There's at least one other, maybe a couple other stories on here that follow the same theme. Both have their strengths, but I'm curious which came first. Someone said this was "one of the first stories on Literotica. There's no date tag for any of the submissions?
Next "Rightbank" asked:
"and, inside a closed costume, why was he wearing a mask?
'The mask was a little bit of a tight fit, and my face ended up in her hair'"
"the mask" is the giant tiger head. He's saying it was a tough fit to get both heads into the same mask (if "mask" is the word). Indeed, the mechanics of all these costumes makes no sense, but that is the beauty of fiction....who cares if it's not physically possible, it's a good excuse for some hot action. Some of the best fantasies are those that have something totally impossible or nonsensical in them. I haven't read a single story here yet that ended up with a ruined family relationship or social ostracism, legal trouble, psychological trauma, or any of the other things that so often come with relationships like this in real life.
@kelsweet. I'm not sure if your remark about date tags was a serious comment you were making, or if you were just being sarcastic about someone else's comment. Either way, every story in this author's library (and every other author's as well) has a submission date. This story was submitted November 4th 2002.
With respect to your last statement, I think you might need to read a few more stories. There are tons of stories here where the characters are kicked out of their homes, shunned by family and friends, and face a multitude of social and legal problems. However, the number of stories with that level of realism is pretty low compared to the rest of the stories with "happily ever after" type endings
I really love your style, I wished that you would still write stories...