Bad News: The first few paragraphs were labored and need editing. Good news: Love the plot, characters and pacing...
Such choices get made regularly in this sad world. Complete as is, but would love a longer telling of the story.
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Nice, needs improvement
Bad News: The first few paragraphs were labored and need editing. Good news: Love the plot, characters and pacing...
Enjoyed it
Such choices get made regularly in this sad world.
Complete as is, but would love a longer telling of the story.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Chaz's Choice or
More submissions by sr71plt.