A little short, but good. Are we ever going to find out who Angela is?
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Anonymous07/05/13
Yes too short
I agree that it was too short. you need to make the next chapter longer. Other then that it was a good story. I would like to read more about his cousins and sister as well as finding out who is Angela.
Whoever Angela is, she obviously is known to him, since she's hiding her face, but she doesn't know that his parents were out of town. That probably rules out an aunt, but leaves in the possibility of a neighbor or fellow student.
Hey, everybody knows it's not the length of the story, but...
I treat chapters as, well, CHAPTERS rather than individual stories. That's the only way I know how to do this. Right now I have three stories waiting around in Literotica Purgatory (sequels to my very first Literotica story, as it happens): two of them are kind of long, while the other one is so short, I'm not sure whether it's going to be approved.
And as long as I have your attention (if indeed I do)... if there's anybody out there who likes my stories and writes similar stories, and might be interested in a collaborative idea I have, please drop me a line.
once again we get left high and hard by an uncaring wanna be hack writer. i wish the sites webmasters would demand that the entire story be written out in rough draft BEFORE any editing or posting happens so the readers don't have to worry about a writer getting lazy LIKE THIS GUY.
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Anonymous10/05/14
I really like this story but where's ch.05 I really want to know who he's talking to on his computer. It's bugging me I need to know
As mentioned by others, so many stories on here start off well, pull you in, get you hooked on the plot, then they just stop and leave you high and dry with no ending. Just why do authors not finish.? It is so frustrating when it happens once, but it's happening far too often. Please authors, if you start a series, at least have the decency to finish it. You obviously have the inspiration to start, so please finish it as well, please?
English
He's run out of cousins!
A little short, but good. Are we ever going to find out who Angela is?
Yes too short
I agree that it was too short. you need to make the next chapter longer. Other then that it was a good story. I would like to read more about his cousins and sister as well as finding out who is Angela.
Whoever Angela is, she obviously is known to him, since she's hiding her face, but she doesn't know that his parents were out of town. That probably rules out an aunt, but leaves in the possibility of a neighbor or fellow student.
Hey, everybody knows it's not the length of the story, but...
I treat chapters as, well, CHAPTERS rather than individual stories. That's the only way I know how to do this. Right now I have three stories waiting around in Literotica Purgatory (sequels to my very first Literotica story, as it happens): two of them are kind of long, while the other one is so short, I'm not sure whether it's going to be approved.
And as long as I have your attention (if indeed I do)... if there's anybody out there who likes my stories and writes similar stories, and might be interested in a collaborative idea I have, please drop me a line.
I have a strange feeling...
I have a strange feeling Kimya is Angelina
More!!
More please...
damn shame
once again we get left high and hard by an uncaring wanna be hack writer. i wish the sites webmasters would demand that the entire story be written out in rough draft BEFORE any editing or posting happens so the readers don't have to worry about a writer getting lazy LIKE THIS GUY.
I really like this story but where's ch.05 I really want to know who he's talking to on his computer. It's bugging me I need to know
No ending - again ........
As mentioned by others, so many stories on here start off well, pull you in, get you hooked on the plot, then they just stop and leave you high and dry with no ending. Just why do authors not finish.? It is so frustrating when it happens once, but it's happening far too often. Please authors, if you start a series, at least have the decency to finish it. You obviously have the inspiration to start, so please finish it as well, please?
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