Lapdancing Girlfriend Ch. 05

Foam party...

Genius!

I was actually planning her attending a Rave party in Chapter 06...and this will make it even better...I can see it now, everybody dressed in their rave clothes, foam everywhere, and suddenly she doesn't know who's touching who...

Great idea!

Also be sure to check out my blog (URL in profile) for story updates and such!

foam party

thanks - the foam party idea is great...
make here very drunk and wasted - slowly touching first random and then tons of guys can take their turn she doesnt even know who... just by the size of their cocks...

maybe u can let her go in a bodypainting rather than actual cloth... it will be slowly washed off - so she is max exposed in public ;)

Foam party and more...

You should definitely check my blog where I've updated the upcoming Rave/Foam party info...as well as some inspirational pictures, LOL!

Very interesting reading although it has to end soon and if it doesn't at least let Dan get some! Let him drown his sorrows in some pussy!!!

@bruce_parker

Well, there is an end...but I have at least six more chapters planned for this series. I am almost at the end of Chapter 06 (time is so limited, it is taking me forever). In Chapter 06 Dan finally does get some...but I won't spoil it any more ;)

Jen...

Please don't forget the "Jen" part of the story.I'm sure many others as well as myself are pulling for "Jen" to make a comeback and Diamond to go back to where she was in Chapter 01 or less.

She doesn't need to be a total slut. Happy endings can be a good thing.

compliments

Ciao DocCis,
excuse me for my english but i want to give you my congratulations for your story, absolutly the best that I read. Also the description of the same situation
from differents points of view is a good ideas. One thing that I'd like, is a greater attention for the romantic thinkings of Jen for Dan with the fantastic description
that you done of the her sexuality. I loved also the guilts of the two heroes that always
show their love. Now I'm waiting the chapter 6, hoping it will be soon. Thank you
very much for your incredible work

@Anon

Thanks for reading...and no, I'm not forgetting the "Jen" side of things...but I will say things are going to get worse before they get better. I do have her sinking into quite a bit of depravity in Chapter 06, but Chapter 07 I already have some "alone" time with Dan... ;)

@jap7179

Thank you for the compliments and time reading!

Be sure to check out my blog (URL in my profile) for updates on when Chapter 06 will be done and what I'm working on. I try to keep it up to date weekly, and it is better than having to visit Literotica and refreshing my profile each week wondering what's going on, LOL.

Appreciate to comments (and your English is FINE!)

thanks

Thanks for the answer Doc,
but don't worry, I always checking the news on your blog... In relation to the sentiments of the 2 heroes, I loved very much the separation that you made because,
in my opinion, it underlines mainly their love, simply perfect ! Just one question;
the description of the thinking's Dan leaves understand possible cuckold developments (in the classic meaning of the word ). Until now effectively it's been just an element in the mind of Dan and he's been just a theoretical cuckold ( except the episode of the agent Pat in their home ). Can you tell me anything about ? thank you
for your job Doc !

@jap7179

Actually there have been a few others...if you remember, Dan watched Diamond have sex with Mr. DeWight when she was coerced into signing the contract. In addition, I think it was Chapter 05 he watched her again with Mr. DeWight in the shower.

Chapter 06 has another scene where she will be right in front of him and have to choose between him or Mr. DeWight...although I won't spoil it beyond that, LOL

Thanks again!

cuckold or voyeur

Ciao docCis,
I remember of course the episodes but in those situations Dan was more a voyeur
than a cuckold. Maybe, during the party, the scene with Nick ( it's fantastic the idea of the "boyfriend" ) can be called cuckold, where Diamond sees her love and his rival through the windows. Before, Jen wasn't included in the game (except the "test" with Pat Geiger) and only Dan (Charles ?... ) was the player but without Jen.

Coming in Ch. 06!

OK, get your meaning. There is a scene in Chapter 06 which should satisfy your desire, LOL... ;)

You You You can't do that

You have to continue the story. When I got to the last word it was like someone had stopped sucking me just as I was ready to cum!!!! I was not ready for that ending!!!! Damn I believe these stories were with out a doubt the best stories I read on this site! Hands down you have held my attention through the list of stories you have shared with me. I hope you write more!!!!

@rickjones185

LOL, thank you for the kind words, and yes, I will be continuing not only Lapdancing, but ALL my story lines I currently have going.

Problem is simply time. Writing is a hobby for me, and due to work and such, I only get the weekends to write, and then it's a case of whether I'm in the mood or have the time. As I've mentioned before, you can keep track of where my fickled Muse is taking my from my blog (URL in profile)...but rest assured, I do plan on getting SOMETHING out soon...

Fantastic

Finally finished reading this story. It was so long I think my English improved a little bit :)
Please finish the next episode soon. This was the best story I've read in Literotica

@Anon

Much appreciated, and thank you!

I hope to get Chapter 06 out "soon". Be sure to check my blog (URL in my profile) on updates, teasers, and other stories I'm working on!

giving up?

hey - should we give up on the foam party fantasy - at least please submit a longer tease with this episode on your website...

thanks

@anon

LOL, no, not giving up, but as I mentioned on my website there's been a shift in priorities, as one of my stories I am being PAID to write so focusing on that one...it will be storyboarded by a 3D artist in the future. Of course, if somebody wants to slip me another check, I can shift those priorities as well ;)

I'll be getting back to Lapdancing 06 once I get my Lifeguard story done. I'm shooting for the Lifeguard story to be done in May, so summer will bring about Lapdancing, then Annie, and possibly a few others!

I'll look into another teaser...although I haven't touched Lapdancing 06 since starting on the Lifeguard story.

For others, be sure to visit my blog for updates and such (URL in profile!)...

Enough is enough!

I think you have some sort of pathological avoidance of finishing anything. From your blog, you seem to always be working on something. But nothing ever gets finished. Its been two years since you published anything. Yet you claim to regularly be working. If its not one thing its another. Stop stringing people along with your excuses. At the end of last year you said something to the effect of "wow, I didn't publish anything all year. I will get that straitened out." Well, here we are 6 months later and still nothing. Pretty soon you will be saying "wow, two years in a row that I didn't publish anything."

@anon

LOL, well, considering this is merely a HOBBY, whereby I'm not getting PAID and can only do on my free time... Seriously thought, I truly only have weekends to work on this, and when I have family visiting, other errands to do, or whatever, that interferes with that time. I work from 6am to typically 5pm, so rarely have the desire to work on anything M-F. That's just life... So out of the 48 hours I have for the weekend, I'm sorry my writing spank stories isn't a high priority.

The current story I am working on IS a PAID story, so until that's completed (and hey, I'm being paid for it, so that is my focus), don't expect to see anything else until then.

You could possibly appease the nay-Sayers if maybe you released partials?
I mean this chapter was 40 pages - most peoples entire series combined doesn't equal that many pages. So just an idea to keep the troops happy is to release smaller chapters? I mean in chapter 5 there was easily 10 scenes - so you could have done 10 micro chapters to be exact.
Anyway - I would take these peoples comments as positive in that they are irate enough to bitch about it cause they want and need to see more - makes me think of people always waiting for the new starwars or startrek movie.

@Anon

Oh, I do feel humbled there are so many people wanting additional chapters of all my stories! Don't get me wrong. But as I said, time is simply limited.

I tried releasing a story a bit at a time...that was the experiment with Annie Ch. 03. It was released in three parts as I finished each, but the backlash for releasing it in "segments" compared to the whole chapter has been the reason for holding off until I feel a chapter is completely "finished." For all the people upset at the long delay, there were twice or even three times as many who hated the small releases.

Another issue I had was writing out and releasing a chapter "early" I found I had made a mistake in one plot and had to go back and change it after it had already been posted. Surprisingly, a LOT of people noticed the change...so again, I try to wait until I feel comfortable finishing it myself...not falling into the pressure of forcing a release :/

lmao

The Author writes AMAZING storys
most of them revolving around fucking with peoples minds , control & abuse
....
the feedback & comments only add fuel to the fire..
just as the reader waits for the next instalment of Jen & Dan's situation like sharks following a chum line .... The Author will be enjoying making us wait & wait & wait..
possibly eventually deciding to leave the story hanging ... exquisite justice for all us nasty , kinky fucks who have enjoyed the mental torture & anguish of the protagonists.
...
ashamed to say .. Voted 5 stars

@Anon...

LMAO!

Short of some disability, I plan on finishing ALL my stories. The main factor is not incentive or want of writing, but simply time. This is purely a hobby, and with real life issues, I only have a few hours each weekend to write.

Currently working on an actual paid commission which I'll be posting hopefully by the end of summer (GASP, I hate ETA's, LOL)...and then will be focusing on the next chapter of Jen and Dan, followed by Annie.

Everybody can keep up to date on what I'm working on (or how little at times) on my blog (URL in my profile)....

Too F in Long

Too F in Long

@Anon...

Nobody's "required" to read my stories...and if this chapter is too long for you, you probably don't want to read any others at this point, particularly some of my more recent stories...

Uh huh?

first - the story was astounding! ... so thanks...
second - I really wish you would continue it
third - I've read your blogs about about how you'd continue if there was incentive ...you are sooo busy, your computer broke, it rained, ... blah, blah, blah (now you even have a paying following!)
I'm sad you don't have the inspiration to continue since it was so exhilarating to read.

@Anon

Already have the next chapter 70% done, so yes, there will be more...but I can't make up the shit that's happened over the past few months, hehehe...one thing after another.

Also, the top tier Patreon followers have had me focusing on other stories, so that's been the incentive lately, although several are now wanting the next chapter of Lapdancing, so hoping o get back to it "soon"...but thanks for the comments!

Thanks

for taking the time to write this story, it's enjoyable and fun and I am hoping for a happy ending , they deserve it.. ( yeah, I am a romantic...)

Thanks !

@Anon

Thank you for your comments!

I've had an ending in mind for some time...just need to get all the parts and pieces in place. I have a couple more chapters to go...just need to find time to write!

Prediction.

Dan and Jen by the end of the story are no more. Jen can't quit. Dan and his jealosy can't handle it. He quits working for Dwight and goes back to his real estate work. When a woman has to ask if the relationship is over then it is. If this isn't your ending then please prove me wrong. Oh and add some sort of twist just for fun.

@Senior819

That definitely NOT the ending I have planned...and there is a bit of a twist. The ending is one where I have a feeling a lot of people are going to be confused, upset, and probably some not at all happy with, LOL...but there most certainly IS an ending. Ch 06 (which my Patreon users will get a glimpse of this month) is the halfway point...but there's a lot more shit Jen has to go through before then ;)

This story is amazing. Don't change a thing about how you write it because although the details and multiple views you write can become monotonous at times, it makes for better story telling and better re-reads.

I can't say I've ever been this interested in reading a story for the plot in this category of reading. I love how the FBI are just using her because they can and she's super ****ing hot, especially Nick. It's so ****ed up, I love it. I also really liked the dancing scene/limo scene build-up with the male porn stars and what followed. That's usually not my thing but for whatever reason I loved it. Poor Dan LOL

If I was rich I'd give you a blank check to bunker down in a room and finish this entire story.. I love your other stories but this one is by far my favorite!

@Anon...

LOL, thank you very much!

I am current working on publishing a new story, but Lapdancing Ch. 06 is about 80% completed (as my Patreon supporters know, because they get an early preview, LOL)...and it's the next story I'm working on. There's even a supporter that wants me to rewrite Lapdancing as a single book (so remove the beginning rehash of each chapter)...that I am thinking about.

Much appreciated...and be sure to check out my blog (URL in profile) on teasers and other discussions about this and other upcoming stories!

ending

You better not let Chuck get away or not have Jen and Dan. Get together or I will come find you and loss on your keyboard !

@Anon...

Hehehe, the ending is one of those secrets I've not even revealed the most die-hard fans ;) Appreciate the comments!

still waiting for the end.

you said end April...

Oops...

I didn't really lie...but my focus has turned currently towards self-publishing my first book...once I get that done, I'll be poking chapter 06 a bit...

My apologies tho...although the draft IS available on my Patreon page, hehehe....

Well Worth the LONG Read

I have my own ideas on how this may end, but no reason to have a spoiler here. Great plot. Makes me want to try some longer stories I usually pass on. Anxiously await your putting the wraps on this before I forget where we are in this story. Definitely a 5Star favorite story, favorite author.

and then Dan commits suicide.

This is seriously fucked up. I'd elaborate, but the longer I spend contemplating the vile, twisted darkness of this work, the quicker I feel my brain cells dying and my emotions getting darker. So I'll leave it at that. I recommend that the author hug a fluffy bunny rabbit. Then vow never to write fiction again. Jesus...and some people are *aroused* by this?! What the fuck...

So You Think You're Tolstoy, Writing Another "War and Peace"

At least his was shorter!

You're no Tolstoy, you're not even as erudite as Alfred E. Neuman!

Now I have to rate all your "efforts" (sic!) as one star.