I wish I could give you ten, fifty, a hundred stars for this magnificent piece of work! I shall, however, have to content myself - and you too, I hope - with five and an entreaty for still more of this marvellous tale!
Wow, so harsh and erotic! Great continuation, can't wait for these two to finally get together but part of me wants her to rebel, especially with the a Earl, if that makes sense. He can't have it all his own way, can he? Thanks so much. Five stars!
Very hot as usual. Thanks again please keep them coming can't wait
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Anonymous07/07/13
Bravo
This story is SO well written. Although I like how Vivian's training is building, sometimes I wish it would move a little faster. Also, it is difficult to wait for each chapter!
What else can one say....other than keep up the great writing and please give us more. I can't wait for them to actually meet!!!! The suspense is killing me!
I'm not typically into heavy pain. I enjoy spanking scenes, but whipping tends to turn me off. It's a compliment to the author that this scene wasn't a turn off for me. I wasn't particularly into it, but it was so well done that I remained fascinated until the end.
English
What a wonderful story this is!
I wish I could give you ten, fifty, a hundred stars for this magnificent piece of work! I shall, however, have to content myself - and you too, I hope - with five and an entreaty for still more of this marvellous tale!
Thank you.
Wow, so harsh and erotic! Great continuation, can't wait for these two to finally get together but part of me wants her to rebel, especially with the a Earl, if that makes sense. He can't have it all his own way, can he? Thanks so much. Five stars!
Very hot as usual. Thanks again please keep them coming can't wait
Bravo
This story is SO well written. Although I like how Vivian's training is building, sometimes I wish it would move a little faster. Also, it is difficult to wait for each chapter!
Just keeps getting better!
Thank You
What else can one say....other than keep up the great writing and please give us more. I can't wait for them to actually meet!!!! The suspense is killing me!
Brilliant!
This is a wonderful, very well-written story. I'm thoroughly enjoying the slow education of Vivian's body and mind, and can't wait to read more!
I'm not typically into heavy pain. I enjoy spanking scenes, but whipping tends to turn me off. It's a compliment to the author that this scene wasn't a turn off for me. I wasn't particularly into it, but it was so well done that I remained fascinated until the end.
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