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An Interesting Tailgate Party

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/06/13

let's get all the cuckolds and wanna be's

in the same room then, let's nuke the fuckers.

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by Anonymous07/06/13

Married 2 Years and This?

Really? What a loser. Why are you married wimp.

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by Anonymous07/06/13

I agree

lets castrate them and dirty bomb later-a nuke is too costly for those losers.

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by Anonymous07/06/13

Another wimp

Oh how original; another wimp cuckhold that will lose his wife to another man or men that can pleasure her more than him. It's only a matter of time till she replaces him entirely.

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by Anonymous07/06/13

The ultimate fantasy

"This is a true story."

Do you seriously think anyone cares? This is a website for posting erotic fiction.

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by Anonymous07/06/13

Total crap, married 2 years and lets his wife whore herself out!

This is another chucky author , who thinks this type of story is cool. I believe 95 percent. Of the population would find this sick. In the Arab world she would be stoned to death, those of you who get off on this type of story make us normal people sick!!

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by Anonymous07/06/13

Yes

You are a cuckold. And a pathetic wimp.

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by looking4it07/06/13

I hope you enjoyed it because you've given silent permission for future exploits. I have no problem with planned endeavors but this was Ella taking things to the net level without, in my mind, permission. Instead of a woman taking on a couples fantasies this is a slut that will feel in control until she takes it too far. Then it's, "You let me do things before..." Good luck buddy.

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by Anonymous07/06/13

I think every other person who has commented on this story is actually commenting on themselves. You didn't have to read more than a few paragraphs to realize where this story was headed. You should have stopped reading at that point.

For my own part, I enjoyed the story. I particularly enjoyed the 2nd paragraph where she was described as having 32B breasts. Thank you for making her realistic rather than impossibly large.

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by Anonymous07/06/13

Thank god this wimpy cuck/closet fag doesn't support The Irish! He's a Michigan fan so it makes a little sense. Still a disgusting pervert with a sick fetish. Post in the correct category please. You have a FETISH and they have a category for that!

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by Anonymous07/06/13

You sir are a disgusting cuck! Hope you know 99% of the world thinks you are sick in the head. What kind of man allows or even worse wants that to happen 2 years after getting married? You'd have to be a sick fuck and that is a FACT!!!

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by Anonymous07/06/13

IF this is a true story then the author should move his wimp ass to Britain,

They get off being cucked there. To suggest that, at 29 and 5'3" weighing 110lbs soaking wet, could pound vodka shots without getting alcohol poisoning AND be sober enough to decide to cheat on her husband is so unbelievable that I wonder if he author is a 14 yr old boy.

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by LarryInSeattle07/06/13

I feel I must respond!

Why in the hell do these assholes read a story that is plainly marked as "hubby watched wife get fucked" and then complain that they don't like this kind of story. They seem to swarm to it and then make stupid insults. Please, gentlemen (and I use the term loosely), just bypass the whole genre of Loving Wife stories and save yourselves the high blood pressure episode.

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by Anonymous07/06/13

I Agree with Lookingforit

Lookingforit is correct; seen it way to often (both in life & in these stories) once a wife / slut starts taking advantage of this "game" (she has just expanded/altered the rules without your agreement/input) as it started out as; she will continue if you like it or not. If you say no more; she'll more than likely just try to hide the affairs from you. Watch out you may wind up raising someone else's children or, worse.

Once she finds the right man that puts her in her place/shows her what a REAL man is; she'll leave. Although, I have to say thanks; because of boys/wimps like you is why I've been blessed with 90% of the women I've had in my bed. Unfortunately, you can't stay with a cheater; once they stray/push the boundaries they don't stop. Most women usually end up laughing at boys like you. Good luck wimp...... LOL

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by Duna07/06/13

Interesting questions

Here are 16000 cuck stories in LW and only a few stories deal with the INTERESTING questions to not sexual minority man readers.
1. How last these marriage work? How many % of the cuck marriages last to the husband's old ages?
Xleglover's have some stories, where these connections go to awry (either the hotwife left for the last bull or the husband left for a new woman, giving up this lifestyle, etc.....)
Once more: The 99.99% of the cuck stories have not any time depths. Aginst to the Revenge, Consequence stories, where the time depths can even be 30-40-50 years.
2. Do the hot wives belong to that 15% of the women, who do not want to bring up children or hate children?
3. If a cuck hot wife pair wants to bring up children how many % are not interested in DNA paternity.
5. If the children are not DNA relatives of the cuck, the biological fathers can visite their children at the cuck hot wife children family. Do the bulls play with the children of the cuck hot wife pairs between two sex sesssion? (Here I stopped a little, because why my commenters think the ANR weird compared with a cuck hot wife children family life????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
6. How do cuck hot wife pairs bring up children? Will they bring up 18 years old small cuck candidate sons and 18 years old hot wife candidate daughters?
We could recently read a story Strangelife's story "Walking of the Edge", where these interesting questions were written (the 0.01% of the cuck stories).
7. If a cuck hot wife marriage lasts the old ages of the pair, the old hot wife will go to visite the 80 years old cuck in the hospice everyday??????????
I am curiouse about the owerwhelming majorities of the cuck authors why do not deal with these quistions??? Are these marriages the collection of children haters????

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by Anonymous07/06/13

Hey Larry!

Go fuck yourself. People are free to comment any way they want and if you don't like it tough luck BTW This story was horrid. Formulaic cuckold junk Done way to many times here. But that is just my opinion

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by Anonymous07/06/13

so what

another aids factory born. mind-blowing creativity, really. drunk, naked and fucked and everybody dumber than the other. just poor trash all of them. no wonder the whole country is fucked up.

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by William smyth07/06/13

Amazing

It's absolutely amazing how many self-styled critics are named Anonymous--and also surprising that they criticize a story and insult it's author, not because it is poorly written but simply because they don't agree with the sexual orientation of the principals. A sad bunch of narrow minded people. Why do they read this type of story?
I sure don't admire cuckoldry but I do admire good writing and well done pornography.
So this story gets at least one 5 star rating. Hopefully more.

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by Anonymous07/06/13

Um lets see

YES YOU ARE. YOU DUMB ASS PUD SUCKING WACC!

How stupid is that question. The more interesting one would be for how long? My guess is the she has been cheating on you for 4 years now. So good luck wee willy. Everybody there has had her at lest once most likely twice.
Face it she is nothing but the village bike, everybody rides her but now you have pay to keep it up.

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by Anonymous07/06/13

re: Amazing

What's really amazing is that after trashing the rights of others to dare have a different opinion, you finally made a brief, passing comment on the actual story - and yet THEY'RE the ones who are narrow-minded.

BTW, if you can know what is in a story without reading, it deserves to be trashed.

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by Duna07/06/13

I do not understand

I do not understand the owner(s) of Literotica, why do not divide into two parts the LW hub????!!!!!
The sexual minority husband, fiance stories and sexual majority husband, fiance stories!!!!
I would be a voluntar member of a editor group who could divide the 21000 stories, so the sexual minority authors and readers could get their hub same to the gays and we could get ours!

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by Anonymous07/06/13

HEY Larry in Seattle

Go fuck yourself you wimp ass cuckold lover. There is a reason these new writers are slammed, including the existing scum that keep putting this fetish in loving wives. We want to read decent stories in this category and these scum keep putting their wimp ass cuckold shit here. Why not put it in Fetish where it belongs. The comments against this trash will be continued, hopefully we can drive this scum out of this category. Why are you in loving wives Seattle, seems to me you belong in Fetish.

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by Anonymous07/06/13

Just another slimeball author posting..

And for the mentally sick anon supporting this shit, suck my dick you pathetic asshole. And almost everyone knows Literotica in the LW section has become Cluckerotica. Webmasters are too much of being sickos to fess up to their sorry classification of stories.

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by Anonymous07/06/13

re: William Smyte

To give this wimp ass cuckold story a 5 shows your mind set. Listen faggot, you can complain all you want about the anonymous comments. The truth is they are more truthful in calling out a story, especially these loathing cuck stories, then the likes of you, who seem to relish in this fetish filth. This story doesn't even deserve a 1*, no matter how well it's written. It's the fucking contents that count, and this shit failed the test of erotica. Put this crap in fetish where it belongs. I never read that category.

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by Anonymous07/06/13

MMmmmm...

After reading the description I chose to not read the story. It clearly states that his wife was fucking someone else.
If that is not your idea of a good story, WHY WASTE YOUR TIME?
Not signing this because I do not want my scores trashed for the next month. NoI did not read it.

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by Anonymous07/06/13

Reread the Loving Wives category definition

The Loving Wives category definition says, "Married extra-marital fun, swinging, sharing & more," so it would seem all the hate posts for a woman having extra-marital fun is misplaced. This isn't fetish at all...I guess all those that think extra-marital sex is a fetish are reading stories in this category thinking it should only contain husband and wife having missionary sex!

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by Anonymous07/06/13

i feel i must respond

to larry i for one don't get upset when reading what you sick fucks write i laugh at each way you try to convince people that it is normal behavior as far as what people read and comment on it is none of your business, so move on, you as well as 99 percent of people know your a loser and if it was face to face you would shit your pants .

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by Anonymous07/06/13

Anonymous comments

Anonymous comments usually suck, what asshole haters! Maybe they should read the LOVING WIVES section description before they click on the stories!

Love your story, thanks for sharing!

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by Anonymous07/06/13

"Am I a cuckold?" I thought. I could get used to this.

Man card status:

revoked, until you grow some balls

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by thebuffalo07/06/13

Nicely done.

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by SparksWillFly07/06/13

Loving Wives

Certainly is about wives cheating. I think the stories that raise the blood pressure of normal men is the stoies, not about the wives, but about the cuckold husbands. A loving wife is not writing this story. It is about her only as it effects the wimpy husband. When a woman writes a fantasy about straying, without having to characterize her husband as a dickless wimp, the story can be fun to read.

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by tiger4607/06/13

lol

"Am I going to have to learn to be tested for STDs?" I thought.

"I'll have to get used to that"

(Fixed it for yuh)

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by Anonymous07/06/13

Nice - she should use her new Profession

Since her husband got off so nicely feeding her, clothing her und caring for her, while she shows her love in letting him masturbate, teaching him how it is properly done, demonstating that he just doesn´t do it for her, I´d call it a perfectly symbionic relationship. Ok, sooner or later she´ll give im the one or the other STD - but that´s just fine with me... Wouldn´t it be a nicer world if every cuckold would simply eliminate himself? Wimperitica could eventually return to the origins: "Loving wives" instead of "Happy cucks"..

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by Anonymous07/06/13

My 2 Cents

re: William Smyte - other than your made up name your profile says nothing about you consequently you are as anonymous as everyone else commenting here so blow it out your ass

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by Anonymous07/06/13

Who won?

Thanks for sharing your experience! Who won the fb game?

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by Duna07/06/13

Sexual majority husband case

The 95% of the husbands are sexual majority men. For a sexual majority husband THE EXTRAMARITAL FUN IS AT A CHEATING WIFE TO GET RID OF THE CHEATING WIFE AND TO CHANGE HER TO A BETTER SECOND CHANCE WOMAN AND IF IT IS POSSIBLE A SUPER REVENGE AGAINST THE CHEATER WIFE AND THE LOVERBOY(s)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dear cuckolds reader fellows we sexual majority man readers look for here on LW sexual majority husband stories with cheater wives!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The best story is "Fool Me Once" on LW also sexual majority husband story!
BTW I think to change a cheating wife a better second chance woman a very good SEX FANTASY for the sexual majority man readers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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by Anonymous07/06/13

no BITCH!

"I just got the video proof for my lawyer in the divorce!" (is what he SHOULD have said!) It seems like it always starts with just teasing, and then it isn't long before it leads to cheating. But yes, the way you wrote this guy, he seems to like it or seemingly he gets off by the idea of other men with his girl. I wonder if he'll still feel that way after she gets hung up on some big black gangsta cocks who start pimping her out to the neighborhood, and hubby doesn't do it for her anymore because she is so skanky and stretched out she can't feel him inside her anymore. Maybe the light bulb will go off when she starts cutting him off in the bedroom and admits she PREFERS sex with others over him. Maybe he'll have to get an STD first, before he realizes the relationship has turned toxic. Yes, how long will the fantasy last? Hmmm..... What bothers me the most about these tales of slut wives and tolerant husbands isn't the extra-marital sex, as much as when it turns these women into disrespectful trash, who have no self-respect for themselves so they must naturally treat hubby like garbage. The way you wrote this, it just seems inevitable that the worst case scenario is the path that these two are on.

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by Anonymous07/06/13

to the anonymous trolls

No wonder so many talented writers are now not writting on literotica if alll ya going to do is bitch complain and moan about cheating wifes then you must be guys that let their wifes sleep around.

This is a very good attempt i hope to read more

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by Anonymous07/07/13

LOL!!

She'll have you sucking the guy's cock when they get done fucking her ass next. Wimps like you are why real men get more pussy like your wife's.

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by Anonymous07/07/13

only one star for making the husband noting but a wimp cucky. too bad you don't write about a husband with some spine that would have kicked the mother fucker in the balls as he was cumming in his wife so hard he not only destroyed the bastards nus, but broke his wife's pelvic bone. The sau sweetly , did he spray his sperm deep enough, did you feel it on your cervix bitch. SEE YOU IN DIVORCE COURT

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by Anonymous07/07/13

Are u a cuckold?

All Michigan fans are cuckolds!

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by Anonymous07/07/13

What a load of gay cockold shit.

All Michigan fans suck dick, any idea who's kid you are raising, sick little bitch.

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by Anonymous07/08/13

Great story!

Five stars, loved how you built it up with the teasing loss of bra and panties, looking forward to more!

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by Anonymous07/08/13

loved it

wish it were my 50 y/o conservative stockbroker wife.
email if you want to chat on messenger
fantasyluvr56@yahoo.com

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by Lickideesplit11/06/16

Five Months (or less!)

Married in July. ND v Mich football November or earlier, so they were married 5 months or less by the time Sweetie gets nailed. Most of the prelims of watching her get chatted up is before they marry! What happened in the Piss Woods should not be much of a surprise to either of them. And not much of anyone else's concern, either!

4* More time coulda/shoulda been spent developing Hubby and Sweetie as people!

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