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by Anonymous07/12/13

Hot, but poorly written...

Sorry Krispy, I could only bring myself to give you 2 stars. While it was bloody hot, there were just too many repetitions and poor choices of phrase. I'm sure there are plenty of editors out there in Lit-land that would be willing to lend you a hand.

Don't give up though, you do have plenty of potential
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