On The Couch

Not worth it

I stopped reading when he took the pants off of Ann:

1) because the author says: "Unlike James, she had not been drinking." I doubt seriously if he could have even touched her without her waking up and

2) what a disgusting act to put upon a seemingly nice neighbor. With all of his discussions about who is an "asshole," with this assault, he becomes the biggest asshole of them all.

I realize this is just fiction but I should be, at least, somewhat believable.

Bill1104

Yeah, like the other comment..

Once the ass made a move on Anne, I went to the end and click on one-star. Just another typical Literotica crap posting.

Fun

Just a bit of lighthearted escapism. Enjoyed it.

There are three in this story

There are at least three assholes in this story.
The "good" little wife did nothing to stop ass number two's advances, making her equally of an ass for treating her own marriage as such.
In the end one could understand why the main character is divorced.......

Fuck it. I liked it.

A lot of backstory omitted to explain any reasoning. I just took it for what it was. The culmination of a shared interest.

I liked it!

Whilst not advocating cheating or fucking another man's wife, the writing was fresh and I enjoyed it!

See, if the writing is engaging, we over look somethings. This sort of reminds me of some of HDK's work.

Keep it up! You are head and shoulders above many writers here.

Yes

In my stories my main heroes prefer milk..................

james is not a nice fellow

what does that make you and his wife losers. as bad as this story was it was still better then jimbob44 piece of crap it's hard to believe anybody being that dumb.

Love your stories

Wonderful, compact vignettes more than stories, but always a quick treat.

Very well done!

" Come to think of it, a couple of my friends are assholes, but they're still my friends," is a great line.

Too Easy and Quick

Transitioning from seeing her laying there to going straight to the sex took away any real interest in the story. Just a quick fuck ditty. Points out the ironic double standard of the "other woman" vs. the "other man." Reverse the roles in this ditty and the protagonist would be reviled, not praised.

Patient Lady

Sweetie probably had to wait in that position quite a while until Our Hero came in and noticed how toothsome she had made herself look! However, it seems to have paid off for her, since her Horny Host neighbor was a gentlemanly rascal. Ashson is fast becoming the Flash King! I love the last two sentences!

Crap

Glorifying cheating pisses me off. Write a ch.2 where the asshole wakes up and divorces his wife and kick's your stories main assholes ass.

A good story

I'd like to read about the next time they got together and perhaps made a weekend out of it, while her asshole husband was off somewhere being his asshole self.

Thanks for the read.

Laughing?

Your constant referral to their laughing while having sex really ruined a pretty good story...otherwise, quite enjoyable.

Four because you are the only person I ever knew of that laughed while in the throws of sexual frenzy!

Thanks!

good

A real good little treat. Keep them coming.

drunk husband as hole she is a cheating slut and he his first wife divorce him I wonder why he was cheating on her what ells cant keep it in his pants hop the drunk husband catch them .