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WAAAY TOO SHORT!
please make your chapters longer!
Stop rushing! An editor will help with that along with the many errors!
A very private meeting?
Your opening line:
The next day when Adam went into work at 9 am he went straight to the office to speak to Adam.
Adam went to speak to himself?
Good story,a few mistakes
It was a good although short yet again chapter,,,but ,,,cat wakes lexi up telling her its almost noon,,then after she gets up and gets a shower and goes downstairs,,its time for the mail,,,and she says it must be 10;30,time for the post,,not that close to noon,is it..
Next Chapter Please?
I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter. Looking forward to where this goes.
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