All Comments on 'Rain Fell In the Shopping Mall!'

however the flow of the piece was so good, I finished befor I started. I enjoyed it

loved it

a dystopian poem, so dysfunctional, unsure if you are pressing it a bit too much.

Rain Fell In The Shopping Mall is a wonderfull off putting image

and this takes it to the limit, mirrors the artificial

before smiling for an insincere bashful second

with spookily sharp, Splenda-whitened teeth.

but this seems to tend to word salad

which rocketed the karma-fields considerably

reason?

5ed