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by Anonymous

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by HiRez07/08/13

very good premise

I can tell when I enjoy a writer's voice, when I'm interested even if there's nothing overtly sexual going on. Keep it coming!

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by SumacandIvy07/08/13

Hoping for a Sequel

As always hot, but with an intriguing story line to support the sex. There seems to be so much more going on here. I hope to see more of these characters as the setting moves to NYC.

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by dlew07/08/13

Excellent

This was fantastic. The intrigue, the interaction between the characters, all great. 5 stars.

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by Anonymous07/08/13

Loved it!
You're very talented, thanks for writing and sharing.
UHA.

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by FA_JF07/09/13

The further adventures of 'Jasper' and 'Niles'?

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by chesthairslave07/10/13

'Full Enjoyment By All Concerned'

You delivered on all the story tags. Although telescoped a bit early, I loved the surprise, ending the deception between Tim and Julian. I found humor from the two 'queen size' beds instead of king, the Raggedy Andy comment, through Tim's thought if Marty had a name for his whip. I also laughed about Marty's $50 & $100 gifts to Tim. What a cheap insulting bastard!

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