Porn War

very good premise

I can tell when I enjoy a writer's voice, when I'm interested even if there's nothing overtly sexual going on. Keep it coming!

Hoping for a Sequel

As always hot, but with an intriguing story line to support the sex. There seems to be so much more going on here. I hope to see more of these characters as the setting moves to NYC.

Excellent

This was fantastic. The intrigue, the interaction between the characters, all great. 5 stars.

Loved it!
You're very talented, thanks for writing and sharing.
UHA.

The further adventures of 'Jasper' and 'Niles'?

'Full Enjoyment By All Concerned'

You delivered on all the story tags. Although telescoped a bit early, I loved the surprise, ending the deception between Tim and Julian. I found humor from the two 'queen size' beds instead of king, the Raggedy Andy comment, through Tim's thought if Marty had a name for his whip. I also laughed about Marty's $50 & $100 gifts to Tim. What a cheap insulting bastard!