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At last something to complain about
Mr Brusher is of course Brasher. Love the "old fashioned style" in a modern context. I am sure some are lamenting that there is not a sub plot of lesbian romance with Toni. Keep up the good work and make sure you actually finish the story or you shall have your arms ripped off!
Authors note
Regarding Brusher for Brasher Oops! The humorous threat to tear my arms off if I don't finish the story will not apply. The story is finished but you will have to suffer until Chapter 36.
A finish
Delighted to hear there will be a completion. Please accept my thanks for such a well written and interesting read.
late to the party
One of the pleasures I have in reading this wonderful story so late, is knowing that it is complete and I will not be left dangling in grumpy despondency.
Yes
I totally agree with fanfare
Tony NZ
NO !
Fanfare IS a pompous idiot ! One of the worst. Just read the cretin's stories. This drivel? 1*.
an excellent transition chapter
So much happened in such a brief passage.
I was hoping for more details from the Ball.
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