I know that this will be a god story and hope you continue this. Also to the grammar police if you dare say more than the only thing I found wrong you can go to another site. To the author, as I've said you have a good story, the only thing I found wrong is the word strait as that spelling means a body of water instead of straight as in a line, I believe it was a simple error. Overall great job please continue
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Anonymous07/10/13
Great start. Keep going
Had me hooked on the intro. Looking forward to the story
You have a good story telling 'voice.'.
Never feel you need apologize for your work. The best stories set the stage well before the action commences. That is what you have done here. :) Sex, or any other action, comes only when appropriate to the story. Anticipation is so much of the fun, isn't it?
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Anonymous07/10/13
Excellent
Engrossing start,looking forward to reading the rest of this story.
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Anonymous07/10/13
Nice to see an Alpha female that actually kicks ass - too many of these stories treat them as if they're nothing more than an accessory to a male Alpha, lower than any male in the pack.Male and female wolves are both hunters. The females don't just lie down somewhere waiting to be fucked, bear cubs and occasionally run and howl.
Good show, can't wait to see how many asses she kicks before finding her match and mate.
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great begining
Nice start. Can't wait to read more.
I love that you've plotted around the arranged marriage scenario, can't wait to see what happens next!
Liked it keep writing
I know that this will be a god story and hope you continue this. Also to the grammar police if you dare say more than the only thing I found wrong you can go to another site. To the author, as I've said you have a good story, the only thing I found wrong is the word strait as that spelling means a body of water instead of straight as in a line, I believe it was a simple error. Overall great job please continue
Great start. Keep going
Had me hooked on the intro. Looking forward to the story
Great start.
I am looking forward to more.
It was a great attention grabber. I loved it! Keep going...I wanna see what happens next.
dont take forever
i love it shes a bad ass dont wait 4ever to post tha next chapter....
excellect start
Excellent start!
Well written.
You have a good story telling 'voice.'.
Never feel you need apologize for your work. The best stories set the stage well before the action commences. That is what you have done here. :) Sex, or any other action, comes only when appropriate to the story. Anticipation is so much of the fun, isn't it?
Excellent
Engrossing start,looking forward to reading the rest of this story.
Nice to see an Alpha female that actually kicks ass - too many of these stories treat them as if they're nothing more than an accessory to a male Alpha, lower than any male in the pack.Male and female wolves are both hunters. The females don't just lie down somewhere waiting to be fucked, bear cubs and occasionally run and howl.
Good show, can't wait to see how many asses she kicks before finding her match and mate.
Interesting start.
Enough to make me look out for the next chapter. I love a strong female lead so I hope she stays that way.
Thanks for writing.
Tatiana is going to kick ass. I think I'm going to like her.
I like this introduction of the new female alpha and her would be challengers.
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