All Comments on 'I Want You....'

by Kandy5647

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I've got daddy issues

With this story...

BigJohn601BigJohn601over 10 years ago
Well it was a real loving wife story.

And that is the name of this genre'.

thebuffalothebuffaloover 10 years ago

Hot and interestingly told. Damn nice!

IronDragonIronDragonover 10 years ago
That was just damn hot!

Wow! Now I have to sit behind my desk until my hard-on goes down!

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 10 years ago
Awkward Format

This is a really awkward format! I really don't want a fictional character to talk to me in a story. Especially in such a stilted and probably insincere manner (I don't believe for a second that I am anyone's 'King,' and I can imagine how FEMALE readers must feel on having their 'Monster' praised!)

As much as I don't like stories which are 'dialogue poor,' I dislike most of those which are ALL monologue even more!

SamuelxSamuelxover 10 years ago
I love this story

You write wonderfully, my dear. Continue to challenge everything and everyone. Peace.

chytownchytownover 10 years ago
You Write A Hot Story****

One thing never I repeat never call a 10.5 DICK a pretty penis I am still laughing!! Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Really strange way to tell a story

And that made it impossible to enjoy.

IronDragonIronDragonabout 8 years ago
Not a fan of 2nd Person perspective... usually.

However, this was HOT as HELL! Wow, you can write! As BBL said, Mommy's bad! Great to see a real Loving Wife for a change, too. Hot stuff, Kandy! :D

5 Big Stars!

IronDragonIronDragonabout 8 years ago
Ok, I forgot that I commented a couple of years ago.

That's ok, though. This was DAMN HOT! Glad I re-read it. :)

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Daddy

Can't deal with all that daddy shit. I want a woman, not a little girl.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Cut

Cut the Daddy bullshit. It's not cute, it's not sexy, it just ruins your story.

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