by Kandy5647
And that is the name of this genre'.
Wow! Now I have to sit behind my desk until my hard-on goes down!
This is a really awkward format! I really don't want a fictional character to talk to me in a story. Especially in such a stilted and probably insincere manner (I don't believe for a second that I am anyone's 'King,' and I can imagine how FEMALE readers must feel on having their 'Monster' praised!)
As much as I don't like stories which are 'dialogue poor,' I dislike most of those which are ALL monologue even more!
You write wonderfully, my dear. Continue to challenge everything and everyone. Peace.
One thing never I repeat never call a 10.5 DICK a pretty penis I am still laughing!! Thanks for sharing.
However, this was HOT as HELL! Wow, you can write! As BBL said, Mommy's bad! Great to see a real Loving Wife for a change, too. Hot stuff, Kandy! :D
5 Big Stars!
That's ok, though. This was DAMN HOT! Glad I re-read it. :)
Cut the Daddy bullshit. It's not cute, it's not sexy, it just ruins your story.