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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/20/05

All right ...

A few spelling and grammar mistakes, but nothing sinister. Overall, pretty good.

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by Anonymous08/15/06

loved it

the title explains it all, i loved it

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by BedtimeStories7705/09/07

Distraction

It was distracting how you frequently felt the need to mention that she was "18". It was as if you HAD to do a rewrite of your character so the story would pass Lit's censors.


~Eve

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